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Wynterrose98
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Joined: 7/5/2015
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Posted: 12/12/2015 at 1:01 PM
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Hello! I'm WynterRose98, I'm a senior in high school, and in order to graduate, I need to do a project. I am researching the conservation of plants and animals, and I have decided to make and promote an informative website. It is in the early stages, but I would love for people to come and click around on the site to boost my page hits and hopefully teach people about conservations
features include:
~the importance
~extinction factors and what people can do
~examples of plants and animals in danger (WIP)
~separate page on the exotic animal trade (not made yet)
The site is certified safe code (I made it myself) and I do repeated backups to ensure no one had tampered with the code somehow.
http://importanceofconservation.webege.com/
^This is the link. If you find this information useful feel free to let me know, and if you know someone who is interested in the world of conservation management and veterinary practices please tell them! Thank you for visiting my site, and I hope you could take some information from it, remember to volunteer and donate to charities to help preserve these beautiful creatures!
Note: the information on exotic animals are for informative use only and are not meant for veterinary insight.
Taptothebeat
Level 72
Cutely Creative
Joined: 1/12/2013
Threads: 212
Posts: 3,658
Posted: 12/12/2015 at 1:40 PM
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I went and read through most of it. So gave you a view. c:
I was perplexed about a few things, so I decided to give some feedback. Hope that is alright. ^.^''
In the first paragraph in the intro, it was very strange, and a bit confusing how you combined moral obligation and factual results. It would help a lot if you separate the two. Else it makes me doubt if what you write for the facts is true or not. I also think a direct quote would be very good to incorporate. The writing seemed like it could be a bit more succinct as well.
I was most surprised though that global warming was not mentioned anywhere. As from my vague knowledge on the subject, that should have quite a hefty impact on environments: e.g. Coral reefs where quite a lot of species of fish unique to the area reside.
Lastly, just some discussion-- the disease remark made me think of what happened to the olive tree plants in europe. http://www.nytimes.com/2015/05/12/world/europe/fear-of-ruin-as-disease-takes-hold-of-italys-olive-trees.html
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