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Stormpelt
Level 22
Joined: 11/23/2015
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Posted: 11/30/2015 at 9:36 AM
Post #1
P.S. Stormpelt is my own Warrior cat that I made up and will change from Stormkit to Stormpaw to Stormpelt.
When Stormpelt was 6 moons old, she knew that she was a new kit in Thunderclan and about to become an apprentice. The clan's leader, Bluestar, called a clan meeting to give Stormpelt a new warrior who would train her in the way of the warrior. "We have been called to announce the apprenticeship of Stormkit" says Bluestar. "Will any cat take on this training?" "I will" replies Fireheart. "Since Cinderpaw's accident, I am ready to take on another apprentice." Very well, Fireheart" says Bluestar. "Stormkit, do you accept Fireheart as a mentor and to live in the way of the warrior code?" "I do" says Stormkit. "And Fireheart, do you accept Stormkit as an apprentice?" says Bluestar. "I do" says Fireheart. "Congratulations Stormkit. You will train with Fireheart until you are about 12 moons old, and then you can become a warrior. Your name will also bcome Stormpaw to show your apprenticeship" says Bluestar.
To be continued........
Edited By Stormpelt on 11/30/2015 at 11:53 AM.
Sylestigal05
Level 15
Joined: 11/28/2015
Threads: 4
Posts: 14
Posted: 12/1/2015 at 11:55 PM
Post #2
You're copying from the book series; 'WARRIORS' written by Erin Hunter!!! I have the books!
There's 5 books; '#1 Into The Wild, #2 Fire and Ice, #3 Forest of Secrets, #4 Rising Storm and #5 A Dangerous Path!'
The characters have the same names of the cats in the real book! They even have the same Clans!; Thunderclan, Riverclan, Shadowclan, Windclan and Starclan, am I right!?!?!?!?
Stormpelt
Level 22
Joined: 11/23/2015
Threads: 2
Posts: 15
Posted: 12/2/2015 at 8:16 AM
Post #3
That may be true, but the main characters original! I also love the book series!
Stormpelt
Level 22
Joined: 11/23/2015
Threads: 2
Posts: 15
Posted: 12/2/2015 at 8:25 AM
Post #4
This is part 2.
On Stormpelt's first day of training, she learned how to hunt for mice and birds as well as how to fight for when she becomes a warrior. While she was out hunting with her mentor, Fireheart, she spotted a mouse and used her hunting tactics Fireheart had taught her. "Remember to crouch low and keep quiet" reminded Fireheart. Using those skills, she had found her first piece of food for the clan and remembered to bury it to come back for it later. When fighting, she used skills like unsheathing her claws and different strike spots and lunges. She usually ended up winning against Fireheart. When she returned with her mouse, she put it in the food pile when Bluestar called her over. " I would like to talk with you. Follow me." Stormpelt obliged. Bluestar walked over to the edge of the High Rock and told Stormpelt to sit, leaving her to wonder what Bluestar wanted to talk to her about.
Stormpelt
Level 22
Joined: 11/23/2015
Threads: 2
Posts: 15
Posted: 12/6/2015 at 2:40 PM
Post #5
This is part 3.
At Stormpelt's place in front of Bluestar she was confused about what Bluestar wanted to say to her. She hadn't done anything wrong. "I have been extremely impressed with your work. You have learned faster than most apprentices your age" said Bluestar. "Thank you" said Stormpelt. "I was hoping to offer some suggestions but my only one is to keep on working and do your best. But I also wanted to ask you to come to a meeting of all 4 clans" "I would love to, Bluestar. Thanks for asking me." "You may go" said Bluestar. Stormpelt left and went to work, excited about getting to meet cats from other clans......and maybe makinga friend or two.
Redfix
Level 63
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 6/27/2015
Threads: 97
Posts: 1,877
Posted: 1/13/2016 at 6:07 PM
Post #6
Wouldn't it be stormpaw?
IiPurePoison
Level 61
Trickster
Joined: 1/16/2016
Threads: 52
Posts: 5,103
Posted: 3/29/2016 at 8:50 PM
Post #7
I think it is a flashback...
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