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Cyanidae
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Posted: 10/9/2015 at 6:42 PM
Post #1
They're not all done yet, so here's the main post which'll be best updated.
I'd like to know which you like best, why, and what can be improved on at least one design.
Anyway, here:
Crisp Breeze Aurleon
- Tried to embody those crisp, chilly October mornings, the clear blue sky dotted with clouds and the sun adding a touch of warmth to your face.
Harvest Moon Bulbori
- there's several cultures with legends relating rabbits to moons, so the Bulbori is the perfect species for the red-orange Harvest Moon that appears in August-October.
Mulled Cider Kelpari
- Mulled, or Spiced, cider is, well, Apple Cider with spices and other flavorings added. Tried to make a Kelp that looked like it was made of a warm, frothy cider.
Acorn Lunemara
- It's...an...acorn...moth...thingie. Colors are meant to be fairly subtle, blending together but changing just enough.
St Elmo('s Fire) Nephini
- St. Elmo's Fire is a is a weather phenomenon in which glowing blue or purple plasma is created in a strong electric field in the atmosphere. It often appeared at sea and would mess with compass directions, and sailors saw it as a bad omen.
Scarecrow Qitari
- Pretty self explanatory. The mane and hair represents hay/straw, the blue, green, and oranges represent the clothes scarecrows wear.
Candy Apple Sylvorpa
- Not Caramel. Candy apples are essentially bright red toffee covered apples. Sometimes covered in nuts, has a large stick in the middle, those are what the bits of tan represent.
Vampiric Vulnyx
- Ok so it seems like everyone's doing this one, esp with chimera tail, but i wanna take a crack at it anyway. Trying to represent the shadowy, monstrous side of vampires, with a touch of gothic elegance.
Leaf Pile Zolnixi
- self explanatory
Please and thank you!
Gingerpaw
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Fancy Pants
Joined: 8/15/2013
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Posted: 10/10/2015 at 9:18 AM
Post #2
Well, I really like your nephini, lunemara, and aurleon. I thought it was funny, we both did a scare crow qitari, though mine is pretty different.
Edit: Here is my qitari:
Edited By Gingerpaw on 10/10/2015 at 9:22 AM.
Cyanidae
Level 70
The Hallowed
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Posted: 10/10/2015 at 10:25 AM
Post #3
Oh man, i had mine as Lupora first, but then i figured i wanted to do a more occult-y thing with them and i was doing a hayride qit anyway, which wasn't far off.
I like your scarecrow better, it doesn't quite remind me of scarecrows but it looks so good anyway...
Liquidoven
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Joined: 11/8/2014
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Posted: 10/10/2015 at 6:15 PM
Post #4
Favorite: I'd have to say your Nytes, the Nephs are a close second.
Why: I love how similar they look to the actual tree, I recognized them instantly c:
Improve: Candy Apple Vorps- maybe add a little bit of light green to represent the apple, I'd put it as g2 or c2, and maybe as a mut color but I see multiple ways it could work
If you have time would you mind critiquing mine? ^-^ I made a post for it
Edited By Liquidoven on 10/10/2015 at 6:16 PM.
Liquidoven
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Posted: 10/10/2015 at 6:46 PM
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forgot to ping o:
Faiona
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Posted: 10/11/2015 at 2:51 AM
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Hi there! I am locking this thread, please continue your discussion of themed designs in this thread: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=29752
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