Hello! I am seeking constructive criticism on the following peices of art. I am happy to listen to anything you all have to say, and I also have an art shop if anybody cares...~
Anyway, here they come!

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Those images aren't showing up for me, so I'm not sure if it's my computer specifically or if they're broken?

I will send a link.. sometimes they don't work :P

https://plus.google.com/116311047559031516414

Hmm, I'm not an expert with animals, so I can't really critique so much. I'm just going to do tips instead if that's okay.

1. Perhaps try out a different brush tool for the drawing program you are using. Try experimenting with types as well as thicknesses. I think there are better brushes out there to suit your art. I think a thicker brush might be good, but that's just a guess.

2. For the face,
a. Currently the ears are placed on the edge of the circle (the top of the head), which is just slightly too high. They should be part of the head, and the edge of the head should go behind the ears.

b. Currently the eyes are tilted very vertically. While eyes can be very slanted, it is just a tad too much that it seems very unnatural. You can still make sharp eyes without angling so much, so I would try that. (Maybe try making the top corner pointy, and the bottom 'corner' near the nose more flat like a wall)

c. Currently the nose is a bit too recessed. Try putting it slightly up and slightly 'out' (in the direction the animal is facing)

I'm not great at drawing animals, so drew on this cat to show what I mean for all of these.



3. For animal anatomy,
Idk animal anatomy, but my guess is that because you are focusing on making the fur look furry, you are losing out a bit on the shape of the animals. Perhaps try drawing an animal without making it furry, and then adding the fur on the edges after. I think if you can tweak the shape of the drawings a little bit, the rest will follow. c:

Thank you ~