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Entropy
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Posted: 10/3/2014 at 11:22 PM
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I'm copying this idea, yes.
IT/Evil Clown Qitari (Might rework this one, couldn't seem to get all the colours I wanted out of it.)
Unseelie Aeridini/Autumn Fae Aeridini
Maple Zolnixi (AKA: The super generic leaf inspired entry. I wanted to do one too, even though everyone and there grandma has.)
Trickster/Prankster Luffox (Note: Colour scheme/name from Homestuck. If this isn't allowed I'll remove it.)
Tarnished Silver Vulnyx
Kiss of Death Bulbori
Wine Red/Crimson Smile Griffi
Vulture/Carrion Bird Aurleon
Dark Sacrifice/Night Terror Ryori
Black Widow Lunemara
Monkshood/Wolfbane Draeyl
Witch Hazel Faelora
So, when checking for fruits and vegetables in season for fall, I saw garlic. And I couldn't help but think. "How great would it be to have garlic pets running around with vampire pets?" So I decided I had to make a garlic pet, just in case. I am almost positive I'll make another entry but man. Gotta indulge. :P
Garlic Morkko
Black Toad Sylvorpa
Tell-Tale Heart Nephini (Blue for the evil eyes, red for blood/hearts, brown for the floor boards, yellow for the ray of light, and black for the night.)
Jester's Grin Lupora (Decayed Grin)
It was a Dark and Stormy Night Puffadore (Like all those cheesy horror stories. But Stormy or Lightning Puffadore also works.)
Opal Kelpari (Opal is one of the two birth stones for October.) ((Not 100% pleased with this one either. Apparently horse inspired pets give me all kinds of trouble.)
November Birthstone Nytekrie (The November birth stones are Topaz and Citrine. Topaz comes in many colours, I used blue Topaz.)
(I also like how it looks on Nephini.)
Will update here as I make more. I'd appreciate pings for serious feedback. (Except for the garlic morkko, that was just a lark. Unless you really want to.)
Edited By Entropy on 10/9/2014 at 1:38 PM.
Psalmreader121
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Posted: 10/3/2014 at 11:39 PM
Post #2
It seems that I have started a forum trend xD
The only two I honestly like are the Maple nixi and the Tarnished Silver Vulnyx.
As for the rest, the colors aren't really doing it for me personally.
Edited By Psalmreader121 on 10/3/2014 at 11:40 PM.
Entropy
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 12:23 AM
Post #3
Could you tell me what you do like about those two, or some of what you don't about the others?
AaronAmpora
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 12:35 AM
Post #4
Oh man, I really like these. My favorite has to be the Black Toad Sylvorpa, the colors are just gorgeous. Also, the Garlic Morkkos made me smile, as did the tricksters (hell yeah Homestuck).
I do have a few suggestions.
Evil Clown Qitari - I'm not really sure what it is, but I would definitely say change it... Not sure why, but it just doesn't work for me.
Unseelie Aeridini - The brown on the belly seems to saturated for the rest of it... Most of the other colors on it are super light and having just that one be so saturated just looks a little weird.
Kiss of Death Bulbori - I would say, less pink on this one. Most of the colors look good, but just, no pink, it's not very... Death-like.
Entropy
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 12:55 AM
Post #5
First of all, thank you. I'm glad you like my pets. :) I'm personally the most fond of my Ryori myself.
I'm not happy with my qitari design right now, and would definitely like to rework it. I think I might find a more acceptable palette of clown colours than the clown from IT, because it was tricky for me to be even slightly satisfied with it as is.
I'll play around with the Aeri a bit, thanks.
Well, the point of the "kiss of death" was that red/pink would be like lipstick on the bulbori. If I used less pink or no pink at all I feel like it would just be another red and black pet, which while an awesome combination are pretty common this fest. (And in my designs, two of them.) I could maybe use some purples/more purplish shades but I wasn't digging them terribly when I tested them out in the process.
AaronAmpora
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 1:01 AM
Post #6
Your Ryori is pretty cool too. :)
Yeah, maybe going with some darker colors would help? idk?
Oooh, well that makes sense. In that case I like it, keep it as-is. :)
Psalmreader121
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 7:26 AM
Post #7
Well, the colors aren't saturated on the rest of them.
The Tarnished Silver design looks like Tarnished Silver. However, if that is not a 6-visible, may I see that so I can gauge potential?
The Qitari, although the colors are saturated, don't blend well, and don't convey what the name says.
Entropy
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 4:39 PM
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@AaronAmpora
I'll ping you again when I get it changed. And cool, thanks. Maybe I'll add that into the description. :)
@Psalmreader121
Well I generally make them 4-5 vis mostly at random, but show genes/muts I didn't show on the other. I tend to think most 6 vis are a little cluttered, but I can get one for you if you like.
Yeah I didn't do tons of colour saturation for some because I was trying for more of a subtle look in general, and for some of the others because I was only using a couple colours and if they were all more saturated I'd lose the colour differentiation, or because I was trying to mimic colours of something more exactly. :)
As for the qitari, the colours aren't exactly supposed to blend. It's supposed to be bright, jarring, and unsettling. Like an evil clown. But I don't like my colour palette as it is right now because I feel it's uneven. I plan on reworking that one if I have time after finishing all the new ones I want.
Psalmreader121
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 4:44 PM
Post #9
Yeah....but colors can still blend and do that. I just don't like it that much. Can't put my finger on it.
Entropy
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Posted: 10/4/2014 at 4:47 PM
Post #10
Well yes, they can. But I mean, you've seen clowns, yes? They don't really do blending colours. They do lots of bright clashing colours. I'm not pleased with my current execution, but I think I will be sticking with my original concept. :)
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