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Creatures
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Joined: 4/2/2014
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Posted: 6/9/2014 at 6:01 AM
Post #1
so this is a warrior cats book
chapter 1:
willowkit yawned. she had just woke up. she curled up to her mom, featheryarn, smiling as willowkit drank her milk. willowkit opened her eyes, and saw that all of the other kits had their eyes open. when she got up to say hi, lionkit scratched willowkit and screamed, "you will never be with us, willowkit!!!". willowkit went back to her mom, and, when the mom asked her how she got that scratch, willowkit told her everything."oh starclan!!" screamed featheryarn. she ran to the medicine cat, duckpool, and told her what happened. duckpool said, "she is going to be fine." willowkit said, "maybe. just maybe."
Edited By Creatures on 6/11/2014 at 4:31 PM.
Creatures
Level 30
Joined: 4/2/2014
Threads: 14
Posts: 85
Posted: 6/11/2014 at 4:32 PM
Post #2
i always knew i was a bad author :c
Myrtlecedar305
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Joined: 5/2/2014
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Posted: 6/20/2014 at 10:16 PM
Post #3
Give it more depth! it's good! keep working!
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