Hi! I'm working on some designs for the summer festival and would love some help from experienced designers. I only have 3 here now but I'll probably add more as I go.


Black Raspberry Aeridini
Designed after the ice cream flavor. I'm really proud of this one so far and would love some feedback.




Wild Raspberry Lighira
I really like the 3-vis designs I've made for this but I feel like it looks really messy with 6 (but I'm also just not a big lighira person). If anyone has more experience with lighiras and can suggest different traits or a color change I'd appreciate it.





Bubblegum Lupora
Originally made this as "Crystal Caves" but it didn't sound like summer to me.

Keep in mind Ive never had a design accepted as a theme but I do have a background in art. (You can always go ahead and look how I use colors in designs, I dont think Im the best out there, but I have a few good ones.)

I took a look at the first two and I recommend making sure your colors are different. I try to stay away from exact same colors. You can have similar colors if used right. Using the same color can cause them to blend, which usually isnt good.

Another thing is to try to stay away from desaturated colors. (Saturation refers to how grey a color is) Many of your colors are very grey which can cause the design to look muddy.

If youre having trouble you can always pull up an image to go off of.

Heres a rework I did of the first one with these in mind. I included more of the ice cream color as well. Hope that helps a little.

I see what you mean about saturation, thank you!

No problem! If you ever want feedback on a design feel free to pm me.