Xanths:"You look pissed,and you have somewhat a pissed aura around you,not a super strong one tho.It's more full of distaste and hate-ish stuff."

Liquid raised her eyebrows at the people around her. "Anyone else getting no Shinsoo connection at all?" They shook their heads and she rolled her eyes darkly, pulling a long blue rapier from her belt and fidgeting around with it before standing up. "Lets go talk to someone."

((Would you mind giving me feedback on a Sylestia fan fiction I'm writing? If you're willing to, you can find it in the fan fiction forums, thank you if you do!))

"What's Shinsoo connection?" asked Thalie, turning to the newcomer.
She took her phone from one of her pockets.
"I have good cell service". she commented.
She was wondering what she was doing with her sword.

(Yes, I'll read it and I'll give you a feedback :) )
(edit: from what I have already read, it's well written, and the plot and the characters seem interesting and promising. I wonder how the outcast hatchlings from the prologue are linked to the royals/nobles from the story. I'll give you a longer feedback when I have finished reading everything you have written and when I have more time)

I am not "pissed". Distaste, yes. Of course. Reflection scoffed again.

xanthus looked at him,"well being pissed is pretty close to that.And you don't seem to like Reflection!Frisk...you guys seem to have a love,hate relationship" he twirled his fingers around air

"Reseting doesnt make me a good person. Im a horrible person, yet.. chara and sans forgave me.. i dont deserve it.." he fumed and looked back at them. "how i abused and what happened to the timeline... sometimes, i would come across a door, that wasnt there before... but that was only once or twice.. compared to hundreds of resets... when i opened the door i saw a strange monster.. he wasnt like any other. When i went near him, he disapeared. .. 'beware the man that speaks in hands'. I think i know what it means now..." he breathed in shakily. "Do you know... how many times........ i killed my friends and family? I did what i want, because i could just reset and they would be alive, like nothing happened. I tried every path, to try to come up with a different ending. But the one i hurt the most was sans. Sans is my friend, and the only one besides flowey that knows about the resets. I... killed.. his brother, and made him suffer" Frisk wiped his sleeve across his face, his face was flushed and he was on the verge of tears. It was hard to believe that this.. kid, killed so many.

You could make out a conersation between a child and two adults. The child was crying and you could hear some of what they were saying. "I hurt so many people... im a horrible person.." the voice sounded male.

Shut up. Reflection snapped somewhat angrily. There is no love hate relationship. It is purely hate. He paused in his work for a second before muttering something in a low voice, making it hard to hear. After what she did.