((Crystal25152 you still haven't been accepted. You'r girl is still to over-powering.
"She is very smart. Her mother was a doctor, but she died in the invasion and so did her dad, an astronomer. She knows a lot about herbs and such. She also knows lots of other useful things. She has a Eagle as a pet. She was kidnapped when she was 10 and that Eagle saved her life by sending her parents a message she tied on his leg. Her Eagle's name is Apollo. He has golden markings and a spot that looks like a sun on his forehead. She loves bombs and stuff. Her friend, Conner, was tutored by her. She doesn't go to school. Her parents taught her instead and had a lot of college professors teaching her, but she outsmarted them all. But, she did go to a medical school. She likes to spy on people, so she has experience on spying stuff. She studies many things. She can sword fight and do martial arts and such. She can adapt to most things. You can find her saying the digits of Pi and the Element Table. She loves Sherlock Holmes. She can do fairy accurate analysis like Holmes, too. She has a lot of matches and a magnifying glass all the time.""
Try to tone it down. Your girl also can not have a gun for her favorite weapon. She can have the training but you can't start off with the gun. Also if she has training with guns she can't have training with medicine or great with animals... All that Crap.
This is the LAST time you can fix it up. If you can't tone down you'r character, you can't join.
Dun Dun Dunnnnnnnn!!!! :) ))

This is the last time i'm going to let you post crap.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=8404&page=7#68 Author: Dunefairy Time Posted: 11/30/2013 at 10:17 AM Archer scowled at Sebastian, and ran back down the stairs, in a rush. "Heat the water. Heat the water. Heat the water. What should I use?? The stove doesn't work and we have no matches!!" Archer decided to go get some wood and matches from outside. He grabbed his bow and arrow from the wall, and ran out the door, hurriedly. He scurried across the lawn, soared over the fence, and ran for the grocery store. He encountered many zombies on the way, and killed them with ease long distance. They were attracted to him because he had the smell of Orange Blossom's blood on him. When he arrived at the grocery store, he ran in, searched for what seemed to be a millenia, and found some matches and a few pieces of wood. He ran back to Orange Blossom's house, encountering no zombies, leaped over the fence once more, and ran into the house to boil the water. He drew the matches from his pocket, placed the wood down, and lit it. He placed the pot of water over the fire, and when it was done boiling, ran upstairs, hoping Sebastian would be satisfied.

You need more detail! You have to read everything every one has written! You can't kill zombies that easily!!! I already told EVERYONE THAT!! you can't just go running out of your house all willy nilly you should have died. If you don't shape up you'r not going to be allowed to write on this role play anymore.

Check this page out. Zombie Killing Guide

((You used my link! Ha ha. Does my form look better now?))

((It looks good the only thing that doesn't make sense is the whole medical school thing. She is to young to have been in medical school so if you just take that part out and replace it with maybe... your mom showed you a few things about medicine. I would accept you forum.))

((You do know you're being a total jerk right now right?!!! I quit!!))

((Ah... Okay. I don't have much experience with college or anything. *is still below high school*))

((Dune:
Alright then, I tried to help you, but you just wouldn't listen. If your going to write like that and not abide by the rules that have been set, then I'll happily let you leave.
Maybe when you shape up and become a more decent writer/role player, I'll consider writing with you again. But until then, you will not be allowed to participate on this thread anymore.

Crystal:
It's alright. Yeah, medical school is a college thing, and it takes a few years (four I think) to even get through college after you get out of high school, which also takes four or so years. Lol, she would have to be around 23 or so when she finally got out.
But it would be nice if you didn't change her age, as to stay in the age group that we have here.))

((Lol... That would be weird. So, can I RP now?))

Ania screamed as one of the zombies grabbed her arm holding the bat. She ganged to just hit it with the bat in the back of the head, stunning it for a bit. She ran over to Zeck and hid behind him, shivering as she looked at where the zombie grabbed her.

Zeck back away a bit. " Run.. " he hissed at her. Glancing nervously at her then back to the advancing zombies. Ania looked at Zeck and shivered again. " B-but you can't fight all of them! " she squealed, hoping to make him run to.
" I'll hold them off...for a bit..." He gulped as the zombies came closer.
Ania grabbed his left arm. " You run to! You CAN'T fight them all! No one is that strong! And you have to go close up to fight them, if they circle you...y-you will be dead in a matter of seconds, you might even come back as a zombie!"
I have to make him run, he saved my life from my own mother...I have to save him in return, Ania thought.
Zeck sighed and glanced quickly at Ania. " Fine I'll run, just stop whinning... "

Conner saw a gang of zombies surround a boy and a girl. Ive gotta help them! He thought. He burst out the door and started shouted, "Here, you f*cking zombies!!" He shouted. Great move, Stark. Now your really are in luck. He swung his axe all around him, and heads were flying everywhere. But the zombies were not easily defeated. He sliced off the legs on some, hoping to delay them. "Run!" He shouted desperately to the couple. He still swung his axe, but he was extremely tired. His arms ached. His head throbbed. He had to stop. But even if he didn't, he'd die anyway. There were too many. He started punching and kicking them, but it no use. He was doomed.