[Tips]

((-Do only what your character is doing, not forcing the other character into what you want them to

-Use correct grammar

-Appropriate responses

-Have any questions? Ping them.

-(( = OOC or Out Of Character, use these for off topic discussing

-ADJETIVES!!!! :DDDDD
Hope these help in jour Journey to a Professional Role-player))

(Thanks sometime i may accidently do it will try my best not to)

"Thank you" Auris said, returning the polite bow. She had never interacted with hybrids before, so she had just hoped she was doing everything right

Felicity smiled standing upright.

(It's cool with me, not a big deal.)

Umbra: I was exhausted, and now that it was nighttime, I could have dinner and do.. Something. I didn't know what to do. Boredom took over.

Hellion: I had a really good day. Also. Topaz patted my head. What the heck. But it was fun playing Halo, even if Umbra beat us every time. I lit my hand and walked home to the barn, then jumped in. I took off my jacket, revealing the bones running along my sides, along with the ones on my wrists. I glanced over at the hole that was Topaz's house. Then I stoked the fire and put on pj's. I fell asleep in minutes.

"Cmon, Doopie! Let's go home!" Bubble smiled, leading the large Walrien to the house. It lay down, and Bubble put a blanket (which was too small for him) and put a Chikorita Pokedoll next to him.

(( I ship Topaz and Hellion >:3 ))

(Seeing as I am too lazy to read 7 pages of text before posting, I will have my two boys keep to themselves for this post and have you guys approach me.)

Mizuiro~10 miles offshore~

The small fishing boat bobbed gently in the water as Mizuiro prepared to depart. He zipped up his wetsuit and began to check his bag, when the captain spoke to him. "You know the plan son?" Mizuiro gave the man a once over and nodded curtly. "Reach the designated infiltration position in time for Lily to deactivate the security there and allow us to get in undetected." The man nodded and scratched his beard. "I figured as much, but I had to be sure you know. You are the bosses son and all." Mizurio gave the man a reassuring smile as he tucked the last of his belongings into the waterproof bag and zipped it up. "Lily will be fine gramps, she's your daughter after all." "Right you are boy, good luck out there. Do our family proud ya hear!" The man gave Mizuiro a pat on the shoulder, then Mizuiro hopped off of the boat onto Isonade's back and gave the sharpedo a pat on the head as they set off towards the island.

Gabriel~The Pier, West Gate Park~

Gabriel balanced precariously on the concrete barrier at the edge of the water. He spent a lot of time in places like this, that is to say, places near the barrier. Sure the barrier stretched out a full half mile into the water but even still he felt almost as if he were free when he was here.

(YES no more Topaz and Gabriel >;)

Hellion: I was snoring so loud that Topaz and her statues probably heard me


Umbra: "Crap!" I somehow managed to trip and slam my head into the wall. "Ow."