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Forum Index > Games, Contests, and Giveaways > One-shot Writing Contest
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Aphelion
Level 75
Serene Storyteller
Joined: 5/14/2016
Threads: 119
Posts: 9,888
Posted: 10/1/2016 at 10:30 PM Post #61
I <3 to write, too!
Can u read my 'For freedom' story and give me feedback?
Dracornpotato
Level 68
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/11/2016
Threads: 39
Posts: 1,014
Posted: 10/2/2016 at 12:06 PM Post #62
You had some amazing description. I liked your ending.
One thing you should work on is the true feeling of the character, describe how horrible it feels. You did a good job with describing the character's feelings in the beginning, but it wore off near the end, then came up again. I really LOVED IT THOUGH!! IT WAS TOTALLY AMAZING! When you feel you need to write something tragic, you know how you just get totally carried away and it's SUPER AWESOME!!!!!
Dracornpotato
Level 68
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/11/2016
Threads: 39
Posts: 1,014
Posted: 10/2/2016 at 1:24 PM Post #63
Sorry Couldn't delete this (Does anyone know how to delete a post?)
Edited By Dracornpotato on 11/10/2016 at 5:28 PM.
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 10/3/2016 at 6:15 AM Post #64
Bump.
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 10/4/2016 at 9:09 AM Post #65
bump
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 10/5/2016 at 6:19 AM Post #66
Bump
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 10/6/2016 at 10:23 AM Post #67
Bump
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 10/7/2016 at 6:05 AM Post #68
Bump
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 10/8/2016 at 10:06 AM Post #69
BUMP again
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 10/9/2016 at 6:56 AM Post #70
bump
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