(Sorry for this long post, but I wanted to add in some things I haven't been pleased with in these last couple of pages. First, can you guys tone down the cussing? I don't care that it's censored; it's still cussing and people not in this Roleplay may be reading this stuff. Especially on this site, which I know has younger members on here.

Before I go into this second problem, know that I've been roleplaying on various sites for nearly five years now, and have made several mistakes in roleplays like the ones I'm about to bring up. I know this happened a few pages ago, but both of you guys involved in the fight were powerplaying/being OP. Sylvester, you shouldn't be able to dodge everything, as it comes off as OP and you not wanting your character to be hurt. Both you and Rogue also seem to like to Powerplay, which i, in it's simplest terms, automatically hitting/dodging/running away without giving someone time to react. In some cases, it's something that shouldn't be dodged, but the other person should describe the damage as it is done to THEIR character, but that isn't an excuse for them to completely dodge something. Instead of saying "A brutally slashes B", say "A attempts to slash B, taking advantage of the small space between them".

Thirdly, Rogue, I understand you're a vampire/Veela hybrid, but your character seems a bit OP to me, especially when I looked back at a few things. I'm pretty sure it's daytime, but yet your character is immune to sunlight, even though it's not in your form? Also, you said super speed and strength, which compared to any character without one or both can become incredibly OP depending on how powerful each is. Maybe you have faster reflexes than an average person, but you shouldn't be able to see literally any attack coming before it strikes. I think that's part of the reason Sylvester started Powerplaying. Also, I didn't know what a Veela was until I looked it up, and even then, my mind has been on the original Vila, not the Harry Potter version, so you're excused there. I would've been on you a lot quicker about being OP if you were the original Vila.

To avoid what happened a few pages back, that's why I directly stated what downsides my characters have. Shiv is a bloodsucker who hates vampires and humans but is pretty okay with everything else. He also is far from perfect, and is incredibly mortal, but far from easy to take down because of what he is. He's not a human, but a monster, and it should be harder to take him down. Iris has wonderous abilities, but they affect her as well. She also has a bad reputation due to her own beliefs about how she feels her protection is supposed to go. She's also incredibly mortal, but designed to kill dragons, and while killing dragons is one thing, killing something like a werewolf is something entirely different, and as a character, she knows this. Sometimes just writing down flaws in their simplest forms for your character is enough to prevent them from becoming OP and preventing things like powerplaying from happening.

Please don't take this post as me hating everything that's going on currently. I've quite enjoyed this RP so far, even before I signed up, and I'm just aiming to make this enjoyable for everyone involved and also trying to prevent what happened from happening again. Though, I would like it if you toned down the cussing. I've never even seen an Rp that's gone beyond saying damn, and you guys are just throwing the f-word around like it's nothing to worry about.)

(But . . . I'm all the way in a different galaxy .-.)

Jisatsu backs away a bit, a little stunned by Doc, but got the things he asked for, then slapped him. "What the heck! You pretty much insulted my sister!!! Legit dude!" She turns from him, disappointed. "You know how hard I worked to revive her?!"

Everyone, let's just stop for a second and everyone explain what's happening to their character .-.

Tero was teleported with the Crow Man to galaxy from which Tero ran away after being falsely accused of murdering someone. That galaxy is PRETTY far and I'm FAIRLY certain he didn't suddenly teleport back to the room to be taken care of .-.

Thank you for clarifying. Jisatsu is flipping out and is confuzzled, slapping Doc and flipping out some more in the bloodstained room.

Sylvester ran off searching for any bit of trail that would lead her to Tero, she has jumped into a portal

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(I agree with this statement. I know Doc cusses but I don't like it that every few sentences it f this f that. :/ and I was gone for 30 minutes to and hour and have at least 7 pages to read. It wouldn't be a problem if my character wasn't in the scene. Could you perhaps slow down a bit?)

Chloe, all your other points I understand. But for the cussing part, people should read the first page first instead of jumping to latest posts. None of us here can be responsible for their actions. There is no literal rule stating no cursing, and if they do read the first page first then they should know that cursing isn't against the rules here and people will do it :P

(I do it for the lolz)