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Yo, writer to writer, can you take a look at this? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P5T1K_mFHNUzOns9MpBYPgU45jyVMdQjHZG6RfV_4ws/edit?usp=sharing Thanks, I'd appreciate any comments you might have (if you can do that? idk how google docs works)

I like your new avi fyi ;3c

By doing a whole lot of nothing? xD Idk, I'm not that great at either though tbh I mean, there are certainly many more people better than me in both those fields.

Yes weaponsssss----

Hm the only thing I might add about what you wrote, is to add more breaks in the text, and maybe try and use other ways to say uh, gate or trace, because its there alot xD Details are hard >.> Because at some point there becomes too many and you have to compromise just so the writing flows better >.>

Interesting character xD If I had to describe Cypress.... well he's like-- any pjo Aries kid. Obsessed with weapons, curses like a sailor, and brash to the core. Reckless.

Meanwhile Reuvan is more like,, an Athena kid? He's not that smart, but common sense you know. More composed and formal, he understands when he should just backdown and submit but knows when to put his foot down. If he can resolve a situation peacefully he will, not because he likes it but just because its easier that way. But in any situation Cypress is in he goes straight to attacking xD Ask questions later.

As for magic abilities, Cypress is canon a vampire, and Reuvan canon a harpy. There biologically step brothers, with Reuvans mother being a harpy and there shared father a vampire. However only Cypress was turned, as some experiment the father was doing with turning children.

Cypress is a strong fire mage, and Reuvan...well I made him a little special and gave him the ability to control multiple elements, but only very little. Like instead of the bonfire inferno Cypress can light, Reuvan can probably light a torch. Ice, he can freeze just a foot or two of whatever he touches with his whole hand, maybe a handful of water, and just enough plant/earth magic to maybe trip someone or wrap there foot up.

Something like that.

Almost all of my Oc's come from one world with there own backstories relating to that world. its gotten complicated xD

Eh, its not so great xD I generally try to avoid drawing my Oc's because of my style. Except Messa, I draw her alot because its easy and I'm confident in her design.

I have two generations of OC. My first generation is strictly Oak, Xavier (who I've never used in an rp), Valatee, Lyeza, Luka, and Messa. There are a few others but they have small roles. My new generation is Reuvan, Cypress, Nonni, Lyos, Wendall, and a few other minors too.

My world is like, kind of a reflection of Earth, but a mix of fantasy, medieval, with a touch of tech in the form of like, crystal powered devices. And the tech is more like, tools, not communication like a phone or something.

Magic users, or Sorcerers, are naturally born with their abilities. Always custom to fit them, so while they don't have any say in it, they're not unhappy with it. Genetics are kind of complicated and don't really play a factor, if you come from a family of sorcerers ofc your more likely to have magic abilities of some sort, but its random for the most part. You know, destiny and fate and all the ******. You can be of any species and be a sorcerer if you were born with an ability that doesn't have to do with your natural capabilities (you know, obviously harpies can fly). If you come from a family with a few generations of sorcerers, atleast one per generation with a minimum of 4 generations. Your officially registered as a "Lineage" and your family can pick out a family symbol, or crest to represent your little sorcerer family.

(You can also be some sort of "Dancer" which is the result of an experiment gone wrong a very, very long time ago. Its a genetic ability which attunes your body to one specific element. Messa is a Poison Dancer, which means she can make poison herself out of thin air without limit and control it however she likes, her eyes are poison (don't ask me how that works, its a design choice xD). Long ago when kings and queens existed a Spellmaker (someone who dabbles in mixing magics, kind of like a magical alchemist) who was ordered by some kings and queens to make a spell that makes them immune to one element of their choice. Messa's ancestor King and queen decided on poison, because that was a big risk to them as...you know king and queen xD. An unknown side effect was the "transforms one body part into that element" and when they're eyes turned to poison they were furious and killed the spellcaster, which resulted in the spell being lost forever. Like i said before though, its genetic and can still be found in the relatives to thing age, but its very rare, and rarer still that it manifests)

There are multiple magic academies in... well whatever continent my story takes place on, i havent named it, but the most prestigious is the Northern Academy, and thats where all my OC's graduated from. 1st and 2nd generation.


Sorcerers primary job is to stop trouble, like blood thirsty vampires or rampaging murderers, or weapons trafficking. But also kill dangerous wild creatures and such. They kind of do the job of police, bounty hunters, wildlife control, and explorers. They can choose to specialize in one of course, or they could even be peaceful and do things like, care for, tame, and breed magical creatures. They might stay in one spot and guard a specific town, or more than likely be a traveler.

The story goes that Oak after graduating from the Academy, exposed a vampire coven with Xavier. In the process he saved Cypress, who was still a child, like 2. At that point Cypress had been turned, but Oak took him anyway and Oak's parents raised Cypress. In the process Xavier was turned. Xavier is a very..... courageous character. He's a goody-two shoes and a great leader, so when he was turned he got depressed because like any good person he *hated* vampires. Because vampires were despised by basically every species. And after a while he just *left* and faded away, unable to even stand himself anymore.

Cypress was always very attached to Oak, his older brother figure. But Oak had been very attached to Xavier himself, and when Xavier disappeared Oak also became....a little weird. Oak is a necromancer, in my world necromancers can summon spirits only if they have an object the spirit considered important in their old life. Like a trinket of some sort. But of course some spirits are malevolent, not all are helpful and good. Oak accidentally summoned one of these violent spirits, something he knew he shouldn't have done, but was going hysteric at this point and common sense was just not working for him right now.

The spirit cursed him with a sickness that just ate him away slowly. So he died, and Cypress learned that his father was a vampire, and he'd been rescued from a vampire coven. And to this day he still *hates* his vampires fathers guts, and has vowed to take revenge. Especially after he meets Xaviers spirit wandering around the Northern Academy campus and learns the rest of the story.

He didn't know Reuvan was his brother until after a short run-in with the vampire father, the father mentions something that tips him off. Reuvan never got turned, he was born a month after Cypress and therefore had a little less priority. He didn't remember the vampire father, and his mother died when he was young and the only thing he keeps with him from her is that crystal blue earring. His aunt took him in. His father never came back for him because while that happened, Oak and Xavier had cracked down on the underground coven and he had to disappear for awhile.

Anyway adventures ensue through the Academy blah blah blah, they graduate, and they (mostly, Wendall and Lyos stayed with Cypress) all go their separate ways. Cypress hunts down their father, and Reuvan goes off the radar and travels.

Hi, so, yeah. I'm on a tablet now, it sucks, why is the comma and exclamation mark mixed????


Anyway, so about the RP, I'm.... I don't know, a little lost? I don't know anybody except you and orca and everything moved so fast, then every time I reply its wordy asf and emotiony and totally not how you guys are rp-ing and it makes me feel like an odd one out weirdo ;-; Idk, I offered alphadawg an easy way in by interacting with Reu, but they aren't going to reply anytime soon. Idk should I just drop out or smth?


I know its partially my fault, I haven't been very active, but I've been *very* busy during the day, and you know how late I'm up usually, to the point nobody else is