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Nightbane
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Posted: 5/26/2017 at 10:04 PM
Post #51
*bumping*
Typhix
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Posted: 5/27/2017 at 8:03 AM
Post #52
When does this contest end?
Nightbane
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Posted: 5/27/2017 at 9:45 AM
Post #53
Deadline been temporary removed for the time being since the fest is going on lol
Typhix
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Posted: 5/27/2017 at 2:04 PM
Post #54
Oh okay.
Here, READ:
The day was ending, the sun was being lowered from the sky, as two small boys, best friends, played in the forest, jumping in the stream, splashing water onto eachothers clothes. When they bored of that, they explored deeper into the forest. They came around a large boulder to see a very old cabin. The windows were broken out, vines grew everywhere. The boys gasp.
"It's old man Kip's cabin!" one exclaimed, "Let's go in!"
The other boy shook his head, and gulped. "N-no, you can, but I am staying here!"
The brown haired boy frowned. "Fine, stay here then."
While the blonde haired boy stood beside a tree, the other slowly walk forward. When he got to the door, it creaked loudly when he pushed it open. Fear flooded into him, but he pushed on anyway. Inside, it was hard to see, it was very dark, but some light came in through the windows. Everything was dusty and dirty.
All of a sudden, there was movement to the boy's right. A large, dark shape came out of the shadows, and into the light from one of the windows. It looked like a wolf, but it had four, red eyes, a snake like tongue, and horns. The boy screamed as it jumped at him, biting into his arm, and ripping it off.
Outside, the blonde haired boy jumped when his friend screamed from inside. He rushed toward the cabin, but hesitated before entering. He gasp when he saw his friend, laying on the ground, a arm gone, everything, bloody. Then he saw it. The monster.
"What are you?" he whispered in fear.
"What am I?" the monster growled, "You mean, who am I! I am Caedes, Eld-"
The boy screamed in terror. He stumbled back, but somehow the door had closed. Enraged from being interrupted, Caedes snarled and leaped toward the remaining boy. She seized his throught in her jaws, and bit, ending him.
"Mortals," Caedes growled, "so puny and pathetic."
She turned when she heard footsteps. Suddenly her sister appeared in the door way. She looked down at the two bodies as Caedes said,
"Wha-, how did you get here? How did you find me?" she snarled the last sentence.
"Why do you do this?" her sister asked, nodding her head toward the bodies, "They were just young, feeble mortals. They did nothing to you."
Caedes growled. "You wouldn't understand, you were always too soft hearted."
Her sister sighed. "Does it have something to do with your want for power?"
Caedes snarled and snapped, "you don't know anything about power! Why don't you leave, because I am!"
Caedes dragged the two bodies out of the old cabin, and her sister followed. Her sister went right while Caedes was going left. Caedes stopped and watched her sister disappear into the forest, then began to carry/drag the bodies away to eat.
My story writing isn't that great, but I like to do some writing every now and then, and I hope you like the story!
Edited By Typhix on 6/25/2017 at 1:50 PM.
Nightbane
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Posted: 5/28/2017 at 3:30 AM
Post #55
For the fun Of it and to possibly give a small 'help' I did a random voice recording of my 'roleplaying' a line of Caedes, it's bit rough but would you guys be Interested in hearing it?
*hadnt uploaded it yet*
Edited By Nightbane on 5/28/2017 at 3:31 AM.
Nightbane
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Posted: 5/28/2017 at 6:10 PM
Post #56
*bump*
Typhix
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Posted: 5/29/2017 at 4:19 PM
Post #57
Umm... sure, if you want to upload it
Nightbane
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Posted: 5/29/2017 at 4:20 PM
Post #58
did but i feel shy lol
Vineyiea
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Posted: 5/30/2017 at 8:45 AM
Post #59
It was a dark evening. Black thunder clouds hung low in the sky, ready to burst at any moment. The wildlife sensing the malice in the air didn't dare leave their safe and dry homes. Caedes was tired, stalking through the darken wood, snarling at every branch, rock, and tree that and the nerve to get in her way. It had been a long day, longer then most and she didn't care for any delays on her way to her newest lair. She was waiting for news from her sister, who was supposed to have come last week. Not that she did.
"Get out of my way!" She roared at an unfortunate bird whom had swooped by her. With a snapping swipe, the bird was batted to the ground. Snarling in disgust she continued back home. This had truly not been a good day.
Some distance away two young children were running for their lives. Their family hadn't had enough to pay the tribute to Caedes, so now their lives were supposed to be forfeit. When the two siblings decided to run for it, a hunting party had been sent after them. After all, no one wanted to anger Caedes. The siblings knew they couldn't run forever, yet neither wanted to admit defeat, for that would mean certain death. Suddenly the older sibling spotted a cave, grabbing his younger sister, he dived into it. Praying that they would be missed as the hunters rode past. Not daring to breathe both of them were dead silent. It wasn't until the hoofbeats had long faded into the distance that they relaxed. Which is also when the two children noticed the cave they had hidden in. The setting sun now cast an eerie red light the walls of the hidden cave.
"Um, maybe we should find a different place to stay the night?" the younger sister asked timidly. The floor was littered in bones and trophies of long dead foes, and the walls had been splattered with blood. Not to mention the throne made of humanlike bones, that they were sitting beside.
"No, if we leave now, the hunting parties will find us and bring us to Caedes. We cant leave. Anyway, this is probably just an old wolf den or something." The older brother said firmly. The younger sister nodded doubtfully. What wolf den had blood splattered on the walls like this. But she didn't mention it out loud, maybe it was better not to think about it. So the two siblings settled in for a long night of waiting.
Caedes stopped dead outside her den. Her tails lashed, and the forked tongue snaked out of her mouth. Someone was in her den. A wicked grin split her face in two as she smelt the fear in the air. Maybe this day was horrible after all, how could a day end better then having a terrified snack? Making her footsteps light she slunk into her den, keeping to the shadows so she wasn't seen. Two children huddled together in a back corner, beside her beloved throne of bones. They both reeked of fear, and exhaustion. A thought occurred to her, maybe these were the two runaways, the ones meant to be her tribute! Caedes dark eyes glittered in amusement, they ran right into her jaws, she thought with a satisfied snap of her teeth. At the sound of snapping teeth, both children stiffened.
"Something is in here with us." whispered the sister.
"We didn't see anything come in, I'm sure were fine." replied the brother, but his voice shook with fear. Deciding that she didn't have the patience, and had played with her food long enough, Caedes stalked out of the shadows, the almost entirely set sun illuminated her striped horns and sharp teeth.
Oh, don't worry. I'm take all of your fear away, you foolish, pathetic mortals. You won't ever have to worry about anything again. Caedes crooned
The siblings leapt up, pressing themselves as far back into the wall as possible. Both desperately looked for an exit, the youngest thought she found a hole she could squeeze into, but there wasn't any time. The brother pulled his younger sister behind him, sheltering her even for just a second longer. Just as Caedes was about to leap for them, another shape swept in. This one worse then even Caedes. The younger sister whimpered in fear. The shape stopped as she took in the scene
"Caedes," it sighed, "What have I told you about playing with your food. And also, for that matter, I thought I told you young children were off the menu."
"Sister, what are you doing here?" Caedes snarled,"You are getting in the way of me and my food."
"Sorry, I guess you don't want to here the news I have about your war that you started." Her sister said with a raised eyebrow.
Taking advantage of Caedes being distracted, the two siblings darted into action. The brother shoved his sister into the hole hissing after her
"Follow it, once you find an exit leave this woods. Never look back, and get to a city and hide, never stop hiding." Then the brother darted away, running at Caedes. The sister hesitated only for a second, knowing her brother was giving his life for her, then crawled away quickly. The hole would be too small for Caedes to follow her.
With an annoyed snarl, Caedes swiped at the boy. With one blow he lay on the ground.
"Thanks a lot, now half my dinner is gone. grumbled Caedes, Now I have to go chase it." Caedes's sister snorted and replied, "Oh, you'll be fine with one child for dinner. Let the other one run. Besides, I thought you agreed not to eat children and instead to wait until they've grown up."
With a mournful sigh Caedes glanced outside. It had started to thunder and rain, the stars not visible through the thick cloud.
"But they taste so good." Caedes whined. Her sister only looked at her.
"Fine, the girl can go for now. I'll find her once she's a bit older. Anyway, I don't want to go out in this rain. It takes the fun out of hunting." Caedes grumbled, "Do you want some?" Inclining her head towards the boy. Her sister shook her head, so Caedes grinned and made herself comfortable.
It had taken hours, but finally the younger sister climbed out of the dark system of caves. It still poured, but the sister was grateful for this. For it would hide her scent from Caedes, if she was trying to find her. With a determined look on her face the young girl set off into the night to find a city.
Edited By Vineyiea on 5/30/2017 at 8:59 AM.
Streamstar
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Posted: 5/30/2017 at 10:28 AM
Post #60
The moon shone overhead as willow made her way through the trees. The sound of crunching leaves echoed through the forest. She had spent ages waiting for the moon to become full so she could kill Caedes, the elder ancient that had taken everything from her. She killed her family, destroyed her home, and now she was finally going to get what she deserved. She had spent a long time trying to get a hold of a weapon strong enough to kill the elder ancient. She continued to stalk through to forest, searching for any sign of Caedes. Just when she was about to head back, three red, glowing eyes peered out of the darkness. "Hello mortal, why are you out in the forest tonight? There are a lot of predators that roam this forest at night.". "Well is that ironic or what, Caedes." Willow said boldly. "Well you're right there." spoke Caedes, chuckling a little. "Oh what am I doing, I shouldn't be having a disscusion with my dinner." she concluded as she lunged forward at willow, aiming for her throat. Willow drew her sword, the engraving glittering in the moonlight. "Where did you get that!" Caedes screeched. Willow looked at it closer and realized that it was not reflecting the light, but absorbing it, making it glow under the full moon. Caedes quickly recovered, "I'm just going to kill you anyway" Caedes spoke, almost agrivated. Caedes lunged again, this time aiming for Willows right shoulder. Willow dodged and swung the sword at Caedes, landing a blow on her side. The sword seemed to burn Caedes, causing her excruciating pain. Willow thought she would run off, but to her surprise Caedes lunged forward once more, this time succeeding in ripping off Willows right arm. The sword fell to the gound with a clank. Willow, not knowing what to do, tried to run. She continued untill she realized, she wasn't moving. She had been frozen in place. "I was hoping you'd be more of a challenge." Caedes said. "Oh well, time for dinner" Caedes said as the world went dark.
Edited By Streamstar on 5/30/2017 at 1:35 PM.
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