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GhostlyFours
Level 60
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 8/28/2015
Threads: 61
Posts: 3,710
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 12:30 PM
Post #51
haha yea i guess >.<
Katelynn4545
Level 71
The Artistic
Joined: 5/24/2015
Threads: 350
Posts: 17,635
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 1:31 PM
Post #52
How long have you been writing?: um.... I really don't know
Have you finished any stories/books/collections/etc?: Nope Just a hobby helps me decompress
Do you have any stories here? Nope (but I'm starting one link to the intro is below)
Are you open to receiving critiques/comments?: Yes!
Are you open to giving critiques/comments?: not really(but I love to read so I will read whatever)
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=29258
Littletoes101
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 9/6/2015
Threads: 74
Posts: 658
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 1:31 PM
Post #53
Welcome to the club!
Katelynn4545
Level 71
The Artistic
Joined: 5/24/2015
Threads: 350
Posts: 17,635
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 1:32 PM
Post #54
Thanks!!
Littletoes101
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 9/6/2015
Threads: 74
Posts: 658
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 1:55 PM
Post #55
I also need help with novel ideas, if anyone wants to help me out the thread is here:
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=29234
Redfix
Level 63
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 6/27/2015
Threads: 97
Posts: 1,877
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 2:01 PM
Post #56
Ok, I'm done with my story, soo please give my advice! It would be much appreciated, it's one page two or three, I believe
Redfix
Level 63
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 6/27/2015
Threads: 97
Posts: 1,877
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 2:01 PM
Post #57
Ok, I'm done with my story, soo please give my advice! It would be much appreciated, it's one page two or three, I believe
Littletoes101
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 9/6/2015
Threads: 74
Posts: 658
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 2:05 PM
Post #58
I like how the family member in this case was a dog, because it brings another point of view into it. Although, I think it's a bit unrealistic how after 25 years someone wouldn't get over a dog; being sad about him gone would be believable, but still mourning and being that upset is a bit...eh. Other than that, I like it.
Redfix
Level 63
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 6/27/2015
Threads: 97
Posts: 1,877
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 2:14 PM
Post #59
ok, thanks. I tweaked it up a little, is this better?
Littletoes101
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 9/6/2015
Threads: 74
Posts: 658
Posted: 9/20/2015 at 2:15 PM
Post #60
That's better ^^
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