Anytime! (I was going to put something else here, but looking over it it sounds really creepy for some reason. Idk why...)

these are theme designs so traits shown are just examples :)

*Penumbra*
I love the Aeris! I would suggest experimenting on genes a tad more because I think there are a lot of other combos that may have more potential than the current ones. Just a though because other than that I think they are practically perfect! The color pallet is simply amazing.

For the Puffs, I think the light blue is not the best color that could go there, maybe experiment more there as well. In my opinion, which you can discard as you please, the light blue is not a color I like to use because it reminds me of dishwasher. While these pets are clearly far from dishwasher, I still think you should change the color of the beaded flower and the flower petals and eyes. To what, I'm not actually sure, that is completely under your jurisdiction.

The Vuls are beautiful! I don't think the name really matches what they portray though. If you want to keep it sea themed you could do something like 'Beauty of the depths' or otherwise I think of 'Painted Nights' or 'Child's Dream'


This is my critique, you can ignore or apply as you see fit ^^

~Limor
For the Fae, I think it is a wonderful design, but I don't understand why the male has a bone mask. When I think of strawberries, anything scary/creepy is far from my mind. I also think you should brighten the reds a tad. If I found a strawberry of those colors, I might think it was over ripe and brown in the center....

For the Morks, I would see if I could de-clutter them some (Fewer Traits). It's a little overwhelming, but that may just be me. I wouldn't miss the dragon scales Mutation.... I might even suggest you try it without.

The nixis, They are AWESoMe! Absolutely beautiful colors! I love the colors so much, I would theme my whole bedroom that way if I could XD
But.....
When I think Jellyfish, I don't think anything that resembles leaves or feathers/wings.... Maybe try something else instead of leaf wings and Regalia of Hermes. Also, Stubby tail honestly looks great, but (and I may just be getting too picky here) that's not 'jellyfish' to me either?


This is my critique, you can ignore or apply as you see fit ^^

@Hiraeth,
I think the Nephs are really cool! You made the colors work well together, and the name for it fits perfectly, even adds a certain aspect to it that makes me almost in awe of what this neph represents. If you want a crit though, I think you could play around more with the Fairy shimmer.... It's not bad, its just too much yellow. I like the yellow and I like the glow of it, but its just a *tad* too much

This is my critique, you can ignore or apply as you see fit ^^

these are theme designs so traits shown are just examples :)

Okay, I'll take that into account next time XD
But so I can better understand, would you please explain that more to me?

Thank you thank you! I'll see what I can do about the glow. I was kinda basing it off of the hazy streetlamp glow, like the way it reflects on wet streets at night. Perhaps I should desaturate it just a teeny bit! (I'm glad you like it :D)

I thought it might represent something with street lights! Its a very creative design!

Looking for some criticism on these three!
-not summer entries though-


Blonde Assassin
Female version only








Dusk Flower Feilds







Lady Of The Forest
(Need name for male counterpart.... open to suggestions)