(Hi again. I know I keep correcting you like every other post, but since this is your first RP, I'm gonna talk you through some more ettiquette if you're chill with that.
-Take the interaction opprotunities. Trust me, the RP will be four times better if more charathers interact with eachother.
-Also, you were godmoding with that last 'fight' with Blue; the player decides when their charather gets KO'd, not the person attacking them.
-Might as well talk about powerplay while I'm at it. A few examples of powerplay are "Bob kicks Otto and Otto can't dodge!", and "X sneaks up on Y and Y doesn't notice!". It's a bit unfair and annoying. Try and avoid that.)
Ink made a face. "I hope you don't mean Nightmare..."
"Do I wanna know?" Crow inquired.
"Probably not." Ink confirmed.
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Papyrus eventually made his way to the wrecked building. "Geez.... you wouldn't think a guy that short could be so gosh-darn quick..." He managed as he regained his breath, hands braced againt his knees. He spared the wreckage a sideways glance and huffed. "He better be alright..."
Edited By Awkwardmollusk on 2/1/2020 at 10:23 PM.
Attio
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Posted: 2/1/2020 at 10:29 PM
Post #42
currence checks blues pulse and then runs and hides in the trees. he hopes attio received the message.
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ATTIO deals the final blow to chara. he then proceeds to travel to reapertale in hopes of recruiting them in the OMEGA ALPHA WAR. (attio vs. Apophis).
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abyss says "crow, would you mind taking the high ground while I take the low ground?"
Awkwardmollusk
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Posted: 2/1/2020 at 10:42 PM
Post #43
(Hi again. Great job interacting, but... Omega Alpha War? As in final battle? It's probably too soon for that.)
(Also, easy on the caps lock. You have bold, underline, and italics at your disposal.)
Crow blinked in surprise, glanced up at the sky as if considering it, then flashed Abyss a confident smirk. "Heh. High ground happens to be my specialty. Righto, I'll keep an eye out for ya."
Ink beamed as well. "Great, looks like you're settled then!" He chimed, whipping out his brush and leaving a smear of paint on the ground. "Well, I'll be off. See ya!" He added before jumping into the puddle and vanishing with a splash.
Crow hopped back a pace in bewilderment. "Did he just--??"
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Papyrus steadily climbed the wreckage. "Bro? You out here?"
Edited By Awkwardmollusk on 2/2/2020 at 12:17 AM.
Larkian
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Posted: 2/2/2020 at 12:10 AM
Post #44
May I join?
Attio
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Posted: 2/2/2020 at 7:20 AM
Post #45
(sure. just don't choose guys that are already used. a little warning. this is my first time ever doing one of these. also if you aren't going to be talking to the characters, then talk in parentheses recommend if you don't know anything search up undertale AU masterlist.)
(omega alpha war has been going on for several years before it was taken to the underverse. it may go on for an unknown amount of time)
attio travels to the underswap universe. he pauses, then leaves. he travels to the garden
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abyss says to crow "let's start in snowdin. two of the orbs I found were in snowdin."
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currence decides to stay in snowdin to keep an eye on alphys and the timeline.
Edited By Attio on 2/2/2020 at 7:31 AM.
Awkwardmollusk
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Posted: 2/3/2020 at 11:56 PM
Post #46
Crow shrugged, then opted to walk for now. "Snowdin. Ugh. Don't really care to go back down there, but if everything'll go back to normal... Alright, just stick with me, alright?"
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Papyrus waited a moment for a response, then shifted his weight after he didn't get one. Without a second thought, he dashed up to investigate.
Attio
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Posted: 2/4/2020 at 8:33 AM
Post #47
currence teleports to waterfall. he walks up to alphys. "you! you!! I should have known you would interfere." alphys says.
currence replies "I can't let you kill this universe." currence then teleports to hotland and walks up to the lab. the door opens and undyne steps out.
Awkwardmollusk
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Posted: 2/4/2020 at 9:47 AM
Post #48
"What do these orbs even look like, anyway?" Crow inquired as they walked.
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"Heya!" A voice suddenly chimed from behind Currence.
Attio
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Posted: 2/4/2020 at 10:48 AM
Post #49
abyss says "well they are spheres with a different color. they also seem like they have a crystal in them. the one we are looking for is a blue colored one."
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currence turns around and says "howdy to you."
Awkwardmollusk
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Posted: 2/4/2020 at 11:43 AM
Post #50
Two colorful eyes gazed back at him. "Enjoying Underswap, huh?" Ink simply asked, tugging idly at the end of his scarf.
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"Alright, I guess we can search around." Crow shrugged. "Just gotta get up the mountain first. I can in a jiffy but since you can't fly...."
Edited By Awkwardmollusk on 2/4/2020 at 11:44 AM.
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