Suddenly, BrokenStar smelt fox, very strong fox. It was getting closer, but it mingled with the scent of cat, he guessed it was his clan. Broken told his clan to stay back with the flick of his tail. He leaped into a bush and landed on a pile of silver fur. It was a cat. "Who are you, and why are you here?" the leader said, still new to the whole, protect clan, serve clan, be leader kind of thing. She was kinda pretty.. he thought.

Starfalling~

Easily I shook him off, though in return, the fox shook me off. In a flash of Silver and black fur, the other cat had left. "Move!" My tone was frustrated and slightly scared, because the fox now had me pinned, and was snapping at my legs, tearing my skin. With a painful yowl my body suddenly went limp, making the stupid fox think I had lost. Then with a small burst of strength I freed myself and snarled at the fox, blood dripping from my two front legs. Then the fox jerked its head forward and grabbed my right front leg, digging its canines in and shaking hard. Pain shots up my leg and I tried to get free.

Broken started back but heard the struggles of the warrior. Broken tackled the fox. As it fell he helped up the silver RainClan warrior. "You should go." He tried not to sound rude. He licked his paws. The fox started to get up and he jumped on it snapping at it's neck. "Go!" he sounded panicked.

Briarpaw was blocked by the group of warriors, who were running to camp to warn everyone of the fox. "Brokenstar!?" she called. "Brokenstar!" she tried jumping over the crowd to help her leader.

*ThunderPelt curled up into her hunting position, carefully stalking the quail thrush that was hopping right in front of her. Hoping to get a good strike, she creeps closer. Suddenly, the smell of Rainclan cats flooded her nose*

Starfalling~

My ears flattened to my head, as I ignored his order. Snarling I lept at the fox and clawed it's eyes. The fox now blinded stumbled a bit before I pinned it down. It tried to snap at me, fangs scratching my stomach slightly. It was struggling, and I nearly was shaken off. "Should we kill it, or let it flee?" I asked him.

As I enter the den, my paw stepped into a pool of blood. I dropped the fish in shock to see the gray cat dead. This she-cat was the new mother that had new kits. I looked around the den to find the kits. Then I heard a small meow behind the dead mother. I look behind the dead cat to see three little kits crying for milk. I let out a breath of releif, but that relief quickly ended when I relies there is only three kits; this mother had four. I to a deep sniff to see if I can pick up a scent of the killer. "Fox." I said to myself.

*ThunderPelt took a long sniff, and picked up where the scent of RainClan cats were. She followed the trail and came onto a clearing where another she-cat was looking at a dead mother who just had kits. Too afraid to speak out, she slowly creeps back to where the dead mother is and hides in the nearby bushes*

"We should chase it out of the Clan's territory." he said looking at her. He jumped on the fox as the apprentice ran up. "Go! Go! Go!" He yelled as the fox ran. BrokenStar chased the fox out f his territory.

I heard a noise from some bushes on the other side of the den. "Oh, no," I whisper in fear. Quickly and careful, I put the kits on my back and cared them to my den. I clean the kits from their mother's blood. I had two big problems now: the kits need milk and someone not of Rain Clan was in the nursery den. I was walking in circles to think of what to do when Brown water walked in my den. She was a new mother who's kits were killed by a flood. Then the idea came to my head. "Brown water, I'm so glad your hear." I said to Brown water at a fast pace, " I need you to feed the dead kits-I mean the dead she-cat's kits! I need to check out the ben-I mean den." Before Brown water could say a word I quickly ran back to the nursery den. At the entrance of the den, I stood in fear. I took a deep breath and said to myself, "You can do this Two-eyes, you can defend yourself." I slowly walk into the den.

(Brown water is just a background character I'm temporally using only to explain the survival of the kits. Is that ok?)