That could work. I'd figure we'd just add cages if other people joined. And you're aware that 2, 6, 14, 10, 3, 7, 11 and 15 wouldn't exist?
Xsnowpeltx
Level 16
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Posted: 4/1/2013 at 11:27 PM
Post #42
I'm not sure about the extras being there. It makes it seem so the people in the back rows would be cut off from interacting with anyone except those near them. I'll discuss it with Crow
Dundee
Level 64
Aspiring Gladiator
Joined: 3/9/2013
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Posted: 4/1/2013 at 11:34 PM
Post #43
ohhhhh, so that's how it works
yeah, that makes sense
so it's more like this?
Xsnowpeltx
Level 16
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Posted: 4/1/2013 at 11:37 PM
Post #44
Yes, that would be it. We could add more in the front if more people joined.
Starfall
Level 60
The Whimsical
Joined: 3/1/2013
Threads: 112
Posts: 4,629
Posted: 4/2/2013 at 9:14 PM
Post #45
Name: Blake Colton Username: Starfall2466 Age: 17 Gender: Male Experiment number (must be 7 digits): 3195420 Type of Experiment (animal or technological): Technological Description of changes due to experiment: Half his face(right) is now made out of metal, and the eye is made out of red glass that can still see everything like a normal eyeball. He also has a metal tail that is heavy and slows down his movement such as running, standing, jumping, rolling. He also has a metal two tail that sticks together mid-way and then spreads out. Character’s Appearance(or a picture): He kind of looks like a half human, half robot wearing brown cargo pants, and a blue t-shirt a bit worn out. He has a green eye and has black hair. The metal tail rips through the pants a bit.
Description of Personality: He received a trauma from the experiment, and doesn't talk to others because of that; he is confused and is afraid of what will happen later on. He doesn't have hope for anything anymore because he thinks since he is already a 'monster' he has no future (Finding a job, returning back to complete human, having a family who accepts him now, etc.)
What is your character good at: He can endure/repel diseases quite well.
What are some faults and fears: He's afraid someone/everyone might betray or use him so he keeps everything to himself. He has a serious case of Somniphobia; A fear of sleep because he thinks something could attack him when he's in slumber and he won't even be able to see, or know what it is/can't defend or attack back. This causes problems for him because he ends up staying up late and sleeps only a few hours, making him drowsy occasionally.
Example paragraph (Basically show us how you rp, you can also make that your introduction upon waking up in the cage room):
In a cold cage, Blake rocked back and forth while digging his nails into his knees hard. "I can't sleep...I can't..." He muttered beneath his breath, over and over again. He stared at the cold metal flooring of his prison with his green eyes, lifeless. He could barely move thanks to the tail that weighed heavily beside him. He knew something would come get him eventually if he slept. He was dead-tired, but he couldn't risk closing his eyes for a second, He had to stay awake or else something, anything, would attack him. He forced his eyes to open, but slowly felt them slowly closing. He used his remaining strength to slap his face and he began reciting the sentence again. "I can't sleep..."
Anything else you want to say?: Syzygy~!
Edited By on 4/3/2013 at 7:18 PM.
Crow
Level 40
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Posted: 4/2/2013 at 9:28 PM
Post #46
Please explain how this part:
he had a love for animals ever since he was a kid, but after being infused with severed parts of a tiger, one animal he especially loved, he became mad as in wary/snappy and is known as dangerous by everyone in the lab (Is this allowed to be known by everyone in the lab?).
is somehow not stolen from Zeo, considering their character has that exact same backstory except with a fox. And we are already asking them to revise their character because it is too antagonistic. Being dangerous, specifically more dangerous than everyone else, is not a trait we want in characters because it both assumes that you are much better at fighting than all other characters (*cough*godmodding*cough*) and because there are already antagonists in this roleplay. Having player antagonists is counter productive and unless handled superbly will not end well. Besides that, an experiment that has shown itself to be a danger to other experiments would be kept in solitary confinement and be unable to interact. If it was a bad enough danger the experiment would be killed outright.
We have asked you to stop asking the two of us incessant questions that we do not have time for. That did not mean that you should start asking them in the middle of your application. If you cannot write a satisfactory character without us holding your hand throughout the process then you cannot join. I'm sorry I'm being so harsh, but both mods are very tired of dealing with this.
Starfall
Level 60
The Whimsical
Joined: 3/1/2013
Threads: 112
Posts: 4,629
Posted: 4/2/2013 at 9:30 PM
Post #47
Quote From:
Originally Posted: 3/6/2026 at 8:05:23pm
Please explain how this part:
he had a love for animals ever since he was a kid, but after being infused with severed parts of a tiger, one animal he especially loved, he became mad as in wary/snappy and is known as dangerous by everyone in the lab (Is this allowed to be known by everyone in the lab?).
is somehow not stolen from Zeo, considering their character has that exact same backstory except with a fox. And we are already asking them to revise their character because it is too antagonistic. Being dangerous, specifically more dangerous than everyone else, is not a trait we want in characters because it both assumes that you are much better at fighting than all other characters (*cough*godmodding*cough*) and because there are already antagonists in this roleplay. Having player antagonists is counter productive and unless handled superbly will not end well. Besides that, an experiment that has shown itself to be a danger to other experiments would be kept in solitary confinement and be unable to interact. If it was a bad enough danger the experiment would be killed outright.
We have asked you to stop asking the two of us incessant questions that we do not have time for. That did not mean that you should start asking them in the middle of your application. If you cannot write a satisfactory character without us holding your hand throughout the process then you cannot join. I'm sorry I'm being so harsh, but both mods are very tired of dealing with this.
X_X Oh dear, terribly sorry, did not see that entry! I tried reading every form but it seems I skipped a few! Let me change it >_< I'm sorry for troubling you and XxsnowpeltxX (Sorry, i don't know if this is exactly the username?)
EDIT: Sorry, this will take some time.
Edited By on 4/2/2013 at 9:36 PM.
Crow
Level 40
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Posted: 4/2/2013 at 9:49 PM
Post #48
Snowpelt and I, after discussing it, have decided on a fourth rule for new characters, which is that due to imbalances, we will not be accepting animal morphs, only tech. This is subject to change if we get a ton of tech people joining, but for now anyone who wishes to join must make there character a tech experiment. (I will edit this into the first post)
Talyn
Level 67
Trickster
Joined: 3/30/2013
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Posts: 3,425
Posted: 4/3/2013 at 7:07 PM
Post #49
Name: Dusk Username: Talyn Age: 16 Gender: Male Experiment number (must be 7 digits): 4295100 Type of Experiment: Tech Description of changes due to experiment: Four mechanical appendages connected to a control device along his spine that's fuzed with his nervous system (if you've seen Spiderman 2's Doc Oc, you know what I'm talking about, just without the AI). They're about 6' in length, though they're difficult and complicated so he has to learn how to make them function.
((Thought I'd add an image of the tech just in case others didn't get the reference. The image is not mine though.))
Character’s Appearance(or a picture): Dusk is 5'9" and his shaggy brown hair that tends to get in his face- hiding his amber colored eyes, as at it's shortest it's around eye level and at longest it covers his neck. He's not as skinny as the other's, but that probably has to do with having been well-fed when he came in.
Description of Personality: Dusk has a bit of a passive-agressive personality- prefering to wait for a perfect oppertunity before doing something, especially when he's put in a situation that he's not comfortable with- like being experimented on by some shady organization that kidnapped him and then stuffed in a cage.
What is your character good at: He's good at working with his hands, having used to help out in a metal shop before he was taken, though he's also talented at woodcarving- not that those help him out a lot here. He's strong and tough and rarely shows weakness.
What are some faults and fears: Doesn't like being helpless and dislikes people touching him- especially to take him someplace he doesn't want to go. He has a tendency to be sarcastic and snap at others when he's in a foul mood. He hasn't been around for long so he doesn't really know how to act around the scientists and is easily pegged as most likely to try and escape... Though he hasn't tried yet as his mechanical arms tend to cause problems for him, which frustrates him to no end.
Example paragraph: The first thing that had registered in the boy's mind as he woke up was that he had the most terrifyingly realistic dream ever. The second thought was that the floor was cold- which was very much not like his bed. The bed had never been comfortable, but it had always been warm and at least a bit soft and this was nothing like that. Slowly opening his amber colored eyes all he could see at first was his hair- reminding him that he needed to get a haircut soon.
Placing his hands firmly on the floor he realized just that- he was on the floor, not in a bed. Worried he had started to push himself off the ground only to find that his back was very sore to the degree that it hurt to move, and that it felt significantly heavier than he remembered- almost as if an extra weight was added to it. Brushing his hair out of his eyes he stared in shock at the two metal appendages laying on the ground beside him, leading to his back. Lifting his head to look at the other side he saw two more matching mechanical arms. With a small groan he laid his head back on the cold floor, staring blankly at the bars of the cage that made his new home... So, it hadn't been a dream after all... He sighed softly and closed his eyes, hoping to go back to sleep.
Anything else you want to say?: This is my first time trying something like this so please bear with me, I'll get used to it soon.
Edited By on 4/7/2013 at 2:42 PM.
Dundee
Level 64
Aspiring Gladiator
Joined: 3/9/2013
Threads: 10
Posts: 160
Posted: 4/3/2013 at 11:27 PM
Post #50
so is the plan that everyone who's been accepted writes their intro post, and then either crow or unicorn tells us what happens next and we can react to it? or do you want us to start interacting with each other before things start to happen? or should we just make up what the scientists do next?
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