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Theialish
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Posted: 9/7/2020 at 1:30 PM
Post #391
herobrine intensifies
anyway, time to throw the first three designs
Theialish
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Posted: 9/7/2020 at 1:32 PM
Post #392
Autumn Shrine Aeridini
Black-Capped Chickadee Aurleon
Chupacabra Bulbori
Tamer234
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Posted: 9/7/2020 at 5:47 PM
Post #393
Yup I did herobrine
Rashomon
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Posted: 9/8/2020 at 3:30 PM
Post #394
Hey guys, I know I added stuff for you to review just a few weeks ago, but I have one more design to review plus a "which-one's-better" design thing...so voila.
Please critique them, I'm very uncertain about these three...
And here's the "which-one's-better":
So please tell me which Nixi design you think is better and why you think it's better. Thank you very much for your time everybody! (And please give harsh criticism, I know this is a weird request but otherwise I'll most likely forget to edit my designs...)
~Cream of the Crop Zolnixi~
OPTION II
~Riverbank Zolnixi~
Edited By Rashomon on 9/8/2020 at 3:30 PM.
Hiraeth
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Posted: 9/8/2020 at 3:59 PM
Post #395
Personally I like the second nixi better - more colors! Perhaps in lieu of fall festival themes, you could call it Ghostly Riverbank or something like that. I'm not the best with names and idk if that's the type of criticism you're looking for, but oh well. Also perhaps darken some colors like so - (not too noticeable but just for contrast etc)
Rashomon
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Posted: 9/8/2020 at 4:05 PM
Post #396
Ooo I really love the name, mind if I use it? True, Riverbank Nixis doesn't sound as...fall-fest-ish...lol. But yeah, I do like them more than Cream of the Crop, and do you mean darkened like this?
Original >> vs. << Edited
Because if so, I think that would work, but the only thing is, I love that bright glowing sea-green-ish on the Mystical Unicorn gene (I think that's color slot EC???), so would it do if I kept that bright sea-green-ish and darkened everything else?
Thanks for the feedback! ^-^
Hiraeth
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Posted: 9/8/2020 at 4:12 PM
Post #397
Yeah! Idc if you use the name lol. As long as you have variation in shades you should be fine.
Rashomon
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Posted: 9/8/2020 at 4:14 PM
Post #398
Oki, thanks for the criticism! (You have very nice names, my imagination is dead atm OwO)
Edited By Rashomon on 9/8/2020 at 4:14 PM.
Scoutwolf
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Posted: 9/8/2020 at 5:15 PM
Post #399
For the Spectral Flame Aurleon, perhaps make some colors more darker to contrast with the blue? In the reference, the blue really pops against the black background, but you don't have to do black. Maybe just a darker blue so the brighter blues or the blues you want to stand out can stand out.
Rashomon
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Posted: 9/8/2020 at 5:27 PM
Post #400
Ok, thanks for the criticism! Do you have an example you could compare to?
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