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Stringworms
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Posted: 6/30/2021 at 5:46 PM
Post #21
no problem, feel free to ping me if you have another one of these ^^
Queenimperial
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Posted: 7/9/2021 at 8:16 PM
Post #22
Purple Kiss Aeridini - I listened to Ponzona a while ago and now I can't get it out of my head xD
I loved the gold and various shades of red you used for this design. They give the design some contrast, but not too much that the colors lose harmony.
Sweet Berry Aurleon - The shades of pink match surprizingly well together! However, judging by the themes the admins have chosen recently, it seems that they tend to stay away from monochromatic color palettes for themes.
Ocean Breeze Ferrikki - Perfect. The gold really makes the blues pop.
Red Cedar Lupora - I think the color palette looks great on the Lupora. There's nothing to tweak.
Breaking Dawn Nephini - Overall, the color scheme is great. I liked how the black was used to add some contrast to the bright pinks and yellows. However, the purple feels out of place.
Melted Chocolate Puffadore - It makes me want to eat chocolate. The caramel color was executed perfectly to add some variety to the colors.
Berry Blast Ryori - I don't know about this one. The blue and purple are too close to the pinks on the color wheel that they seem wonky together. I suggest that you try this color palette on a different species.
Strawberry Sundae Zolnixi - I love how you managed to add contrast using different shades of pink. Like I said before, this design doesn't have a high probability of being chosen due to it using a monochromatic color scheme.
Rashomon
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Posted: 7/11/2021 at 4:27 PM
Post #23
OH MY GOSH YOU UNDERSTOOD THE PONZONA REFERENCE
:0 I never noticed that about monochromatic colour palette-things. I'll keep that in mind and edit the design!
Should I add some cream hints to the Lup? :\
I'll take all your feedback into consideration, and edit accordingly!
Pick a few pairs from my stables, I'll breed you 3 offspring ^^
Queenimperial
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Posted: 7/11/2021 at 4:41 PM
Post #24
Cream hints would be nice, especially for the genes.
Can I get offspring from Wings of Elysia and Wings of Salvation; Anathos and Faerie; Encrypted and Vermilion?
Edited By Queenimperial on 7/17/2021 at 9:54 PM.
Queenimperial
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Posted: 7/17/2021 at 11:30 PM
Post #25
*coughs* ^
Rashomon
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Posted: 7/18/2021 at 5:27 PM
Post #26
Sorry for the wait, it's been a rough couple of weeks. Anathos and Faerie are related and therefore unbreedable, but here are the other eggs.
For the third pair, can I get offspring from Your Obedient Servant and I Have the Honor to Be?
Thank you for the eggos!
Edited By Queenimperial on 7/23/2021 at 8:41 PM.
Stringworms
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Posted: 7/19/2021 at 12:15 AM
Post #28
oh my god you have all new pets guess who's back
let's go in order
(sidenote i'm not actually sure if this thread is still open or if you can post twice but i'm here and i hope this is helpful)
purple kiss aeridini
first off, i love how you went with a more pinkish purple color rather than the usual dark purple, gives it a rather berry like look and that works amazingly with the soft yellow colors! second off; the tail choies. both tails are amazing, but i prefer the tail choice on the male as it breaks up the color with an entirely new shade of purple!
as for the wings, i prefer the females wings as they show offf the gorgeous fade from yellow to pinkish/purple, which is amazing. and i'm stuck between the henna on the femal and the markings on the male. very good design!
sweet berry aurleon
the pink and whites are very soft, which is quite nice. i like the way the flowers remind me of a flower bush from which the berries would come from. the way the pink and white blends together on the males crest reminds me of a strawberry smoothy, which is a great thing! not to mention, the beads on the female are quite beautiful and something about them is visually pleasing in a way i can't quite put my finger on.
ocean breeze ferrikki
this design uses cooler colors, which is a stark difference from your other designs. this isn't a bad thing, however, and honestly after looking at the warmer pinks of the other two designs looking at the blue colores feels like jumping into a nice cool pool on a hot day. the golden color reminds me of sand, it's almost the exact color of the beaches i've been to before.
on top of all that, the glasses on the male look a lot like swim goggles, and the jewelry on the female looks like the sort of robe one would wear over their bathing suite while they dry off, amazing!
red cedar lupora
to start off, i like how the lupora isn't dark. most people when making something wooden would use dark colors, but you didn't and that's a very good choice. i have to admit, i'm not a big fan of the white valentines lace on the female, but i think the golden markings on the body really swoop in and save the design.
as for the male, the tail is an amazing choice, it reminds me of a very intricate wooden carving. it is also very, very sparky, which is a win in my book. i love it.
breaking dawn nephini
i will be honest, i don't really see the "dawn" in this one, so to say. the color pallet is amazing, but not really reminescent of dawn. on top of that, the marking on the males wings isn't my favorite. but on the female, i love the choice on the wing and marking combinations, i am a sucker for anything that fades from one color to another,
melted chocolate puffador
to start, i love the choice of pet. puffadors are the first sylesti i would think of when thinking of something as sweet as chocolate. second off, brown and gold are always a good match, and paired with that reddish brown it reminds me of chocolate cherries which are amazing.
the wings on the male are such a good choice, they are transluscent so you can see both the wings and the markings below them, which is a good choice on such a small pet. same with the scarf ont he female. so cute.
berry blast ryori
remeber how i mentioned smoothies on the aurleon design? well this really takes the smoothie cake so to say. the blue flecks in the aura around the ryori looks like the seeds in the smoothies, and i will admit upon first look the blue didn't quite fit, but then on second glass i kind of found myself liking it.
the blue broke up all the pinks and whites, adding a burst of something new and exciting!
strawberry sunday zolnixi
i've never actually had a sundae, but if i did i imagine this is what it would taste like. it's so pink, and that's so cute. now, i'm not the biggest fan of the traits on the female, but i really like how these were used! the lace is so dainty and light, while swirling dust reminds me of when your icecream melts and gets everywhere, and that brings up a lot of good memories.
it's always a good thing when your designs bring up good memories, and i don't think i've come across many other designs who can do that. while the male has less color, it's still an accurate representation of strawberry icecream, and i am a massive fan of hermes regalia. 10/10 very good design.
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