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Sorawolf9
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:10 PM
Post #261
She was able to push Rais to the ground with little effort "wow all that train payed off didn't it old Rais." she wasn't as fat as she was when she left she had a little mussel and her body felt heavier.
Orcastration
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:15 PM
Post #262
(....XD the wallflower...)
Aoi yelped and ducked behind Alexander, not wanting to get hit in the skrimish.
Bluepearl13
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:17 PM
Post #263
Rais rolled his eyes then quickly stood up. As he did, several other gaurds came up behind Luca and grabbed her. Rais joined them, leaving no chance for her to get away. Sinopa nodded to Alexander then jumped down. You are a traitor love. If you don't put up a fight, I can guarantee a lesser punishment. she cooed.
Sorawolf9
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:20 PM
Post #264
her being the little butt head she was stuck out her tongue "I bet i'm stronger than you." she said smirking she wanted to prove that she was strong even after being 'dead' for 3 years. she didn't put up a fight with the guards she just wanted a fight, that's what she came here for any ways that and to see alex.
Espenfalls
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:21 PM
Post #265
( Okay, real quick, Rais and Sinopra aren't that old, Rais is a well trained guard, and though Sinopra isn't the strongest she is able to fight with other means. Luca probably wasn't trained at all by the werewolves. They are friendly sometimes, not pushovers. Yes, they are accepting, but chances are that 80% of the time she if caught in their land would of been chased out and/or hurt or killed. So, she probably wouldn't of picked up tactics from them, because they train in a special area in their lands. Realistically, she might of picked up on tactics during a celebration as they fight to show pride during those.
Secondly, she's 15, even with training a grown adult would be able to beat her easily, maybe not Sinopra as easily but Rais definitely. I know she only pushed him but if he tackled a threat, he probably would of dug into her and put all his weight into it. Being a not fully grown female and Rais a grown male he is heavier by default, so while she would have muscle she probably would -in the least- struggle a bit.
Sorry if this seems rude, pushy, speaking out of term, ect. Buuut well written characters are done better.
Like, it would of been smarter for her to tell Alex upon finding him to come with her into the outskirts of the territory to chat, as if she planned to challenge a leader not very smart to have the chance of waking them.
If she wanted to attack, with at the moment no knowledge of the attack OR only a few hours left so she could do it today, she would of just avoided Alex and went strait to the leader, attacking them in their sleep. Oooor planning an attack by trying to get Vixera to turn against her in the night and then leaving long before the guards could wake.
I am not saying copy this, it's just a huge pet peeve because of someone that badly written characters, ideas, themes, ect just don't sit well with me.
I understand if you're new to RP, but if thats the case you can ask for advice. Sorry for the rant, but I did give warns this is writing based. )
Sorawolf9
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:27 PM
Post #266
(its ok and i wrote luca to be dumb and her fighting and strength as come from fights with werewolves and caring nyx across the river and luca wasn't in italy planning on fighting quite yet but she is a teenager so her instinked it to fight that's why that happen and her getting Rais came from her using her legs because of her being small she could of used all her strength (note this is from experience don't ask) and thank you for your input i really appreciate it)
Cian
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Joined: 6/15/2014
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:27 PM
Post #267
He was somwhat surprise but realy happy that she wanted to know more about him and his kind. " A painfull one, apparently it go into the blood stream and move around in the victim's body making it almost unbearrable if i bite long enough, tho one of my bite is not letal so it's mostly a detterrant. It can also enhence steel and keep it from corroding so it's its primary use for me tho."
Espenfalls
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:31 PM
Post #268
" Really? It can enhance metal? That is very interesting, I didn't think it could be enhanced."
She said, looking at him with curiousity. " We only know how to melt down and shape it.. Though Titan has this pretty gems collection, he puts it on some of his armor. It's really pretty! My favorite are these red (-ruby-) gems! He says he found them near a volcano on an exploration. "
Bluepearl13
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:36 PM
Post #269
(Ya, I wasn't gonna say anything, but Rais would definitely be stronger than a 15 year old girl, even with practice in fighting, as he trained to be a gaurd for much longer. Besides, even if the Vixera didn't like Sinopa as a leader, they are very ritualistic and wouldn't oust her till another Vixera rightfully took her place. So even if she did kill Sinopa in her sleep, she'd not get her spot as it was not through the Power Ritual or inheritance. Sorry.)
Sorawolf9
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Posted: 11/16/2019 at 10:40 PM
Post #270
(its ok btrp)
She had just openly challenged the leader knowing she had no chance but her intentions were not to earn a spot back in the tribe it was to prove she was alive she had survived in the werewolves land despite the odds. And if she could hold her ground against her she could prove herself against the leader she had left oh so long ago.
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