(I meant your own story that could fit within the world. I find it easier to build up from what's already established than to throw in charathers into the middle of a wrapped up plot... does that make sense?)

Sonic tipped an ear, then trotted down the hall, taking note of the fact that there weren't as many people as he expected. "...What time is it?" He mumbled, looking around for a clock. "It's late, isn't it? Max is probably wrapping up."

(just found out baby enchidna's are called puggles..and I can't stop laughing it's adorable,also it takes 4 years for enchinda's to pick a gender so...knuckles had no gender till he was 5)


"So....if he's wrapping up we can catch him on his way out" Azul remarked

(Yeah okay that makes sense. What if there was trouble from the northern lands and a stranger shows up only he's considered the vermin type. He's escaped from the killers from the north as have a few of his friends which are also at Redwall Abby. The stranger knows that the trouble from the north is going towards Redwall Abby but is hesitant to tell them. Without warning the trouble from the nort attacks Redwall Abby. What do you think so far?)

"Oh great," Ajal mutters.

"Hi Sonic, Azul, Ajal," Clay says.

"Right," Ajal agrees seeing his friend Clay walking towards them.
"Hi everyone."

(You know Dragon, in some situations it's better to treat Mobians like humans and not animals. That's one of them XD
But yes, puggle is an adorable term. Echidnas also purr, appearantly, and I plan to use that in one of the comics at some point.)
(Story looks good Star!)

Sonic smirked. "Heya Clay!"

(Seriously? That's a good plot for a roleplay? I'm horrible at plots that why my rps that I host die so quick.)

"Are you looking for Max," Clay asks, "if so he should be in his office or setting up an exibit.''

"(yeah tbh...enchinda's are so weird)

"that's great where would we find him then?" Azul asksed

"His office or setting up displays," Clay answers.

(gtg)

(It's a good start Star. There's pleanty of time to work on it.)
(Echidnas are weird, which is why I find them so darn facinating.)

Sonic smiled. "Thanks!" He chimed.

(Thanks)(For a slice of life comic what about when Bheka and Armory met?)


Clay nods once leading the way to Max's office.