Better?

Yep! Added!

Pure:

Name- Liena Ika
Gender- Girl
Age- Mid-30s
Race/ Appearance- A bit like a centaur, but with a lion instead of a horse. Dark green eyes and dark-skinned, with an albino lion's pelt
Personality- Cold, calm, uncaring, condescending, cruel, sadistic, selfish
Good or bad- E V I L
Job (in general, no need for specifics unless you want to)- Leader of the Pures
Abilities- Can turn into a full lion or human
Backstory- She was raised all her life with the belief that Impures are horrible people that were born wanting to murder Pures like herself. This mindset made her want to get rid of them, making her eventually reach the point where she's creating Cavebeasts to kill them off.
Extra- N/A


Impure:


Name- Muru Ika
Gender- Boy
Age- 27
Race/ appearance- Similar to Liena, but with blue eyes and a dark brown lion pelt instead. His tail is bobbed.
Personality- Anxious, jumpy, kind, gentle, quiet, anti-social, clingy
What makes them Impure- Transgender, lost his left ring-finger after being attacked by his sister
Abilities- Can turn fully into a lion or human, can turn invisible for short periods of time
Backstory- He was born a girl, but was always unhappy with his gender. He never got along with his sister, and when she bit off his ring finger he;d had enough, announced himself as transgender, and fled.
Extra- Extremely scared of Cavebeasts and will be untrusting of anybody that owns one.


Cavebeast:
Name- Barracuda
Gender- Female
Age- 16
Appearance- A massive snake with large bat-wings and eight eyes. She looks like a cobra, just 1000 times bigger. Her fangs are so large they stick out of her mouth.
Personality- Intuitive, curious, smart, a bit sassy, calm, patient, loyal
Good or bad- E V I L L
Abilities- Extremely fast, has a powerful venom, has that sticky substance thing, sees in the dark, her eyes usually paralyze her victims
Backstory- She was given to Liena when she was first made, and at the time was the size of a normal cobra. Liena was taught how to tame her and she did so, binding Barracuda to her. She's grown up knowing only Liena, and would die for her owner.
Owner- Liena Ika
Extra- N/A

Whoa...the story for this


This should be a book

Save me a spot...Barracuda seems like someone i'd love

Yeah, but I'm too lazy to write a full story \_(-w-)_/

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Impure

Name- Asher *Ash* Draconi
Gender- Male
Age- about 16
Race/ appearance-
Personality- kind, brave, tries to keep him and Myra safe
What makes them Impure- he has a leg problem. He litterally cant walk because its twisted so bad. He needs a walking stick to walk, and otherwise cant. At. All.
Backstory- read what makes him Impure. right now, he hides out in a cave with a Cavebeast he found when he was 14.
Extra- he had a strange patch of scales on his arm. it was small enough to keep hidden until he was 10, when it began growing rapidly. when it was spotted, he was exiled, and kept almost dying.
Abilities- none yet, besides extreme durability, heightened speed and strength, and a VERY loud roar. recently, hes been having pain all over his body, and doesn't know why. the pain has been getting worse, and his scales is getting close to completely covering him. only his head, hands, feet, some of his arms, and his... well, genitals are still human skin. he is also shedding hair off his head and body, and some of his original skin on his back is shedding off as well. however, the skin is moveable.


Impure

Name- Myra (last name unknown)
Gender- female
Age- 17
Appearance- imagine a dragon girl with ripped jeans, a DIY bra made of leather just strapped around her body, a tail, dragon wings, and green scales, and you got it.
Personality- kind, dangerous, INCREDIBLY lethal, brave
Good or bad- good, mostly works with Ash
Abilities- hightened strength, speed, agility, intelligence, can fly, breath fire for a short time, roar can make ears pop and rarely bleed
What makes her Impure: blind in one eye.
Backstory- shes impure, sent to the ruins at the age of 5. she had the same patch of scales Ash had, and finnaly mutated into a dragon girl. her english isnt very good now, but its allowed her to basically become a dragon. she met Ash, and is now teaching him to accept the change, something he isnt liking easily. she also can fight like a champ.
Extra- she doesnt leave Ash willingly, partally because of his training, and partally because... shes begining to get a little more than liking him as a freind ;).


Ok, did I meet the requirements?

I'm sorry, but:


Impures are either LGBTQ+ or disabled, or both. Having scales on his arm would be completely normal, since this is a world where there are things like centaurs, angels, etc.


Cavebeasts aren't humanoid. They're terrifying animalistic monsters that are usually the size of houses, if not larger. For example, Barracuda is a giant eight-eyed cobra.


You can fix both of these things by:
For Asher-
A-Giving Asher a disability or a different orientation
B- Making Asher be Pure

For Myra (btw cavebeasts don't have last names):

A- Making her a full-on dragon
B- Turning her into a Pure/ Impure

Frik. My bad!

Ill give Asher a disability. I have a pretty good idea for one.

Ill make Myra an Impure whos been in the... where ever they are, for a long long long LONG time.

Also, whats LGBTQ+?

Ok! And LGBTQ+ stands for Lesbian, Gay, Bi, Trans, and Questioning, with the plus signifying the other sexual orientations.