feel free to edit your original ^-^

Ok!

Name: Brooke Iclyn
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Appearance:

Personality: She is shy, cool, and seemingly antisocial, but once she warms up to you she is bold, brave, witty, and caring. Just don't hurt her friends or she'll hurt you. As she says, "Don't punch a girl who punches back way harder."
Dicipline: Racing and show jumping, and occasionally western events like barrel racing and roping.
Horses: Calypso
Other Pets: A calico cat named Sedona
Crush: Yeah, right. Good luck with that, boys.
Backstory:She doesn't like to talk about it and you can't make her.
Family: Her cat, her horse, and her 28-year-old brother, who she livs with when she is not at college or the stables.
Other: Hmm. *Shrugs* Nope.


So I ,dont forget what her horse looks like

Name:Blake
Age:18
Gender:Male
Sexuality:straight
Appearance:
Personality:Almost always in trouble
Discipline (Jumping, dressage, etc.): Cross country
Horse(s):
Spirit.
Other Pets:
Crush:none yet
Backstory:He came because he loves horses and because he has no family
Family:none
Other:


Stall #:4
Owner:Blake
Name:Spirit
Age:4 years
Gender:Male
Breed:Kinger mustang
Appearance:
Discipline:reining,(3/10) cutting,(4/10) roping,(5/10) working cow horse(4/10), rodeo(6/10)
Skill level: 6/10
Friends/Enemies:
Backstory: He was a wild horse but Blake caught him.
Tack:
Other: He doesnt allow anyone but Blake to ride him and he doesnt allow tack to be on him

Name: Braelynn Wisp ( Brae or Lynn )
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Appearance:
Brae is a shorter girl, and is kinda small in general.
Personality: Reckless, funny, loves causing some trouble, rebel at times, she is a sweet girl though, stubborn, sarcastic, loyal, optimistic, and persuasive. She loves taking night rides.
Discipline: Jumping. trail
Horse: Wildfire
Other Pets: An Australian Shepard named Dixie



Crush: Open
Backstory: Braelynn is a girl from a richer family and she luckily didnt turn out a snob with how much her parents spoil her. She dislikes her parents but loves her older brother and younger sister. She had always loved horses and asked one day to take lessons when she was younger, and has had her horse Wildfire ever since she started getting into jumping, and was made her personal horse.
Family: Parents, younger sister Kali, older brother Hunter.
Other: N/A




Stall #: 11
Owner: Braelynn Wisp
Name: Wildfire
Age: 5 years old
Gender: Female
Breed: American Quarter Horse
Appearance:
Discipline: Jumping, trail
Skill level: 5/10
Friends/Enemies: Open
Backstory: Has been with Braelynn ever since she first started getting into jumping, has a deep connection with her.
Tack: White reins and saddle, black leg wraps, black saddle pad
Other: N/A

Looks like you've added what you didn't have! Allison is accepted, but there's a problem with Midnight. You generally start riding a horse when they are 2 years old. I don't know for sure with fresians, but bigger draft horses take even longer, up to 4 years. If Midnight is 2 years old then his skill level must be very low, or if you want to keep his skills as high as they are now then I suggest that you make him at least 3 times his age now.

They're both accepted!

...However, there are a few things that I'd just like to put out there to make your form even better.

- If Wildfire is 3.5 years old and has been riding with Braelynn since she first started, that means she is quite new to riding as you usually break a horse into the saddle at age 2.
- Wildfire's skill level is a wee bit high for her age. I would say she should be at least 4.5 or 5.
- Mustangs are generally stocky and more heavily-weighted. While they can jump, it is not a strength for their breed. I would suggest making Wildfire a taller, lankier breed or changing her discipline.

You don't need to do any of this, it's just extra to make your horse more realistic. If you were only to do one of these I'd say the last one, I'm sorry but the itch won't go away ;-;

Alright then can Midnight be 6 and still keep his level?

Absolutely!

Oki! I changed it!