(Sorry 'bout that... I just got really sad and didn't feel like posting to much. But I'm okay now XD)
Flow: I got done with all this, and burst, "Okay! What's wrong with all of you?! First out of you two," I look straight at the new arrivals "I want names! Then, Loki, why do you insist on making my job harder?" My steam was almost all gone but I had one more thing to say, "And Ace," I stopped yelling, "Quit acting so tough, you really need to go lie down until I get done with these puffadores." She said puffadores like a angry mother would say children.

Sassette: I look at the miserable puffadore named Loki, and roll my eyes "Really dude close yar mouth. Have you ever seen any other colorful animal?" I add under my breath, "The name's Sassette and you are?" I said as I turned to the blue lupora

Ace: I was so out of it. My head was spinning and my legs were starting to buckle. I heard Flow say 'lie down' and I thought that was a good idea. I tried to move but I just couldn't, I collapse. My last thought was I hope they'll be okay without me.

Puff: "and I am Buttercup. And you are?" This guy was insane! I guess he had never seen my mate.......

Loki: "I... I am Loki."

Flow: I smile at the puffadores "Well, I'm Flow and this is..." I turn around and see Ace on the ground "ACE!" I rush over and when I get to him I step in a puddle of something.... it was blood. I quickly get my mind right. "Loki go get the other bandages! You two go find something to put water in and get water"

Sassette: I just couldn't resist the next thing to come out of my mouth, "So, waz up Buttercup?" I started giggling and then busted out laughing and rolled on the ground. I hear Flow yell something and get up. "Oh mi gosh! Come on Buttercup we've gotta help!"


(Um is Dark there? XD)

Dark: I stop. I can't go on. I run in till I get to the river. I jump in and sink to the bottom. My vision blurs. Goodbye world.....

Loki: "yes ma'am." I run over to where Ace had the berries and dump them out of the cloth. "Here you go."

Buttercup: "at least I am not a Sassy a....." I am cut short. "Aye aye captain!" I run into the woods and start to look for something to help. I find a half hollow log and some pain plant as I call it. It helps with pain but can be a pain in the butt to find. I run back to Flow. "I have returned!"

Flame: I watch in horror as Dark runs off and flings himself into the river, What the heck is he doing?! I thought I was messed up. I chase after him and dive into the river without thinking. Stupid! Your barely able to swim! How do you plan to drag Dark up with you! I swim around trying to find Dark in the water. I find him and gently put my mouth around his neck and kicked with all my might......

Flow: I took the things from everyone, I recognize the plant Buttercup brought back, "This was a good choice Buttercup, but from experience, I know that that plant makes someone bleed more. I'll save it for when he wakes up." I think to myself IF he wakes up. I shake my head, and get to work with the bandage.

Sassette: I run off but couldn't find anything. I get back and see that Buttercup found something for water. "Come on Buttercup let's go get some water in that log!"

Buttercup: "it''s all yours!" I hand her the log. "That is a lot of blood."

Loki: "is there anyway I can help?" I was scared and tried not to show it.

Dark: I don't even try to get to the top, I was feed up with this life. I struggle to get free from her grip. I wanted to scream....that is it. I release all of my air. That should do it.... Yet why was I doing this? Loki. I hated that dog and knew that I would never be able to stay anywhere near him. My vision darkens and my lungs burn. My heart slows and finally stops.

(O.O Sorry it's kinda long)
Flame: What in the world are you doing Dark?! I think to myself as his body sags, making it near impossible that I'd make it to the top even if I dropped him now.... No, Flame, you owe him this much.... I wait for my lunges to burst, I didn't care what happened to me but Dark was going to make it.

Sassette: I grab the log in my mouth and run towards the river to get the water, thinking to myself. Why are you even trying? As soon as these guys find out that your parents did that to him...... I didn't want to finish the thought. I got to the river and stick the log in. I turn to leave but see something that sparks an interest in me, two luporas in the river. "Fine time to swim..." I wait a couple of seconds and see that one seemed to be dragging the other one up. I jump in and try and help. We manage to get the other dog to the top. I grab a log that I saw floating in the water and push it under him. I cough a little, "Water ya waiting for?" I joke "There's a group of dogs over near that bush, I'll keep the log hereish." I offered noticing how awful a swimmer this one was.

Flow: I speak to them with out turning around, "I don't think so... If Dark and Flame were here I'd try to move him to the river, but seeing as it's just me and you three...." I pause thinking about it for a minute, "No, I don't think there's anything you could do..... unless," I thought of something "You're willing to go find Flame and Dark, if those guys come back I don't think I could fight them off, even with your help."

Flame: I couldn't believe it. Someone came and helped me and told me where Flow and Ace were. Even with her corny joke, she looked like an angle to me. I tried to speak but nothing came. I nodded my head and swam towards shore and started coughing but I ran towards the bush and almost right into Loki, "Sorry" I manage to choke I run over to where Flow was. I notice she's red with blood and look down "Oh my gosh, Ace! What happened?!"

Flow: I was so happy to see Flame then I remembered Ace. I realize she was wet "What happened to you?"

Flame: I think for a second seeing Ace like this made me wonder what could do this to him, he's so big. "Dark," I choke out panting, I realize she wouldn't like the truth. "Hit his head and fell in the river." I was shaking. Without thinking about it she told me where to put my paw on Ace to slow the bleeding and she jumped in the river to get him.

I watched as Starfall slowly made it to the cave. Why was she taking so long? I didn't understand until I remembered what she said about the bear.why in the bark did I not notice Sooner? "hey Star you ok?" I crept closer to her slowly and just sat right next to her to offer comfort."I'm not gonna say it's ok when it's not I know how you feel it doesn't feel ok, but it took a lot of courage to bring me here, I know it would be hard for me to do the same....I know how this could feel." I nuzzled her to offer my condolences and quietly waited for her to to finish grieving and remembering.

Loki: i step out of her way. "what do you mean? i dont see how there is any way to hit your head then fall into a river...."

Buttercup: i run to the river's edge as the dogs pull the one called Dark to the bank. i check his heart rate. "he.... he is gone..." i step back. this had not been an accident, he had killed himself.

Accepted