will be handing out ciritques to everyone soon :)

may i please join? designing is always fun

Sure, added you.

Good Morning Puffadore
My suggestions to add into this design is to add some more pale yellows and blue. I would also suggest adding papillon in, this will breakup the yellow you have from beranese. The whites I believe should also be made an offwhite, and defiantly some breakups of those yellows. You could perhaps change g1 to spotted skunk, which gives you cloud like look. Also perhaps change g3 so those other 2 genes can show through


Good Night Puffadore
With this design I think you need to make it much darker and once again change the g1/add a g2. If you make the body a much darker blue color this will help the lighter colors show through. The g3 should be made an offwhite once again, this will look more purposeful and nice to the eye.

With this design I quite like it, but I could perhaps add in a little bit of gold? This will help give the antique design, you could use a brassy gold color.


Midsummer Night
With this design I suggest making the base colors darker, this will allow any colors built up on it to appear much more vibrant. The blues could be changed around a bit - though don't need to be pushed around much


Clouded Sunset
Something about this design seems off. I think the main blue color is a bit to saturated and you could perhaps desaturate it. All of the colors are around the same value and changing the hues could very much help.

Blonde --
With this first design the use of greys and paled out yellows aren't working I think. The bright pink also looks pink I believe. I would suggest making your greys offwhites that are based on yellows.The mane is lacking in yellows and the greys in my opinion don't do much to help it :)


Dusk --
I quite like this design but I think the chest color should be changed a bit


Forest --
With this design I have some issues. I think the purple does not work. I believe using some shades of yellow will very much help. Adding in some orangy colors will be an overall help and changing the black to a shade of dark red-orange will also help

all designs posted since I joined have been given a quick rundown now :)

Can I get some thoughts on these themed designs?

Happy Hippo



Ocean Wayside


Blue Coconut Snowcone

I love them all especially the Griffin

The lighira is so pudgy and thicc, I love it.

The griffi seems too similar to an existing theme, and its color palette seems common.

The lupora is cool, but to me it reminds me of Summoning Circle.