I'm open to helpful criticism. My official submission post!

Strawberry Cream Cannoli Aeridini


Icefisher Aurleon


Arctic Hare Bulbori


Poinsettia Draeyl


Frosted Meadow Faelora


Royal Ice Ferrikki


Midnight Snowstorm Griffi


Eve's Dawn Kelpari


Sugared Camellia Lighira


Evergreen Luffox


Lunemara
Lupora
Morkko
Nephini
Ny'vene
Nytekrie
Puffadore
Qitari

Gilded Christmas Ryori


Flashfrozen Sylvorpa


Christmas Kitten Vulnyx


Cranberry Tart Zolnixi

I probably have bad critisim but a few of your pets colors are leaning on the lighter not pastel but more a sorta not that nice color

I'm gonna need you to be a bit more specific, Blackstar. I can't improve them if I don't know which ones need improving.

Your designs are all lovely but some of the colors seem a bit dull. For the Icefisher Aurleon it might help to try changing on of the colors to perhaps a more turquoise-like blue, or maybe just a brighter blue in general, but if you were to change it, whether the outcome is good or bad depends on the trait that is changed ofcourse. The Evergreen Luffox seems a tad too green, perhaps changing one of it's gene traits to pure white or an extremely pale green could spice it up a bit more.

I feel like I'm just insulting your hard work ^^; feel free to insult me back if you'd like. I have to say I absolutely adore the Frosted Meadow Faelora, the Arctic Hare Bulbori, and the second version of the strawberry cream cannoli though, and I usually don't like pink all that much haha.

I honestly can't come up with any advice or critique for the others. Again, your designs are all lovely in different ways ^^

You're not insulting me at all! No worries there! :D

Rather than water -which I think is where your suggestion of going with more a blue color comes from?- I actually based the Icefisher Aurleon on the sky! Specifically a castover evening sky over a semi-frozen lake, hence the the more purple-ish hues. I might liven it up a bit with a brighter, more off-white purple than the lavender it's got going on now, but I don't think I'll change that one a whole lot otherwise.

As for the Evergreen Luff, you're very right. I'm definitely gonna add some white, maybe some lighter green, and perhaps even a bit of brown if I can get it to look more tasteful than tacky.

I'm actually really proud of my bulb and fae designs, even if I'm still unsure about the aeri. To be truthful, I'm not much of a pink fan myself -I like the singer well enough, though I can't say the same for the color. I wanted the aeri design to look dainty and delicate and the tans of the first one just weren't feeling quite right with me. Pink seems like it fits my original idea much better.

Thank you for your critique, Pirana. I really appreciate it! :)

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