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Electrifying
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 7:43 PM
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Would anyone be interested in a puff base like this:
And as an example, my dream project on this base:
So...anyone interested? If enough people like this, I might end up re-lining and redoing the shading into something with similar quality as this:
when I actually put a lot of effort. And please ignore the lines, I made this for the Aywas alternate finx and there is no point in making the lines smoother because it will end up as a 200x200 pixel image.
And critiques are welcome! Should I make the head larger and the tendrils longer?
Starfall
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 7:51 PM
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I do think they could be a bit more fluffier, but I do like the base concept ouo
Flute
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 7:58 PM
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Oooh, I love the concept. c:
But yeah, my critiques could be:
-Snoutier snout (pointier)
-Bigger ears, they're kinda 1.5x the size of the head for sylestia's taste
-Like Star said, fluffier tail and tendrils (for the tail, can just add literally another layer of fluff under the tail, like for your sample dream picture, a pure white layer)
-I think that the base itself is super cool if you like agile, thin Puffs. However, there are other people who see the species as a cute, stouter furball. Take for example Pikachu:
People like pikachu fat and adorbs, or agile and skinnier for strength. So, I think you should keep one base looking cool and the way it is with a few edits for males, and maybe fluffier, fatter versions for females? The base you made really looks nice as it is, and I do think there's a difference if you make it more "cuter" by adding "fluff" to it. xD
I would definitely buy one, whether you make a new base or not, but in general, most peeps think puffadores (especially female ones) as fat and poofy. xD
Electrifying
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 8:05 PM
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Like this?
Thanks for your input! When you mentioned it, I realised the poofy tail I drew and the sleek-ish body doesn't quite match. XD
Starfall
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 8:09 PM
Post #5
Yup! It looks ragged-y but it's very cute! >//<;; Sorry, I'm not the best 'judge' lol but it does look cute >w< I'd love a commission if so ouo
Electrifying
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 8:10 PM
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Flute, thank you!
Will be drawing up a new version based on yours and Starfall's pointers. :)
o.O I never knew Pikachu was originally that fat!
Electrifying
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 8:13 PM
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I am so obviously not the best judge either.
How did I miss something as obvious as it being fluffy? XD
Starfall
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 8:15 PM
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Uhhh...tentacles? xD
Electrifying
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 8:52 PM
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@Flute
Like this?
(made the head and ears larger)
or this?
(made the head and ears even more large, and made the legs stockier)
@Starfall
Tentacles?
(...I don't have a strange imagination........do I? XD)
Starfall
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Posted: 11/30/2013 at 8:57 PM
Post #10
Yes, Perfect. The tentacles shall swarm the world! HAHAHAHA!
OuO -squirms around on all four hands and legs-
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