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Vigy
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Posted: 10/15/2019 at 8:23 PM
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(( Copy and pasted from my original youtube comment ))
They should have never had the Lightfury be Toothless' mate. First movie was all about how Toothless was supposedly the last nightfury, and Grimmel hunted them down as we learned in the 3rd. But they also mention that Nightfuries are the most intelligent dragon species, so who says the Nightfuries wouldn't just go into hiding? Not to mention, but the Hidden world seems like an ideal place for Nightfuries, not Lightfuries. I feel like it would have been so much better with a female Nightfury leaving the hidden world and running from Grimmel, Toothless finds her lost and hurt from Grimmel attempting to kill her. Immediately Toothless would fall for her because it means saving their species to him, and just overall she is special because she is the "last" female nightfury. Hiccup would probably be in shock and try to help her, but instead she tries to run away, in fear that Hiccup was the same as Grimmel. Toothless follows her and finds the hidden world, meeting the other nightfuries, he was asked to stay forever but said no and asked the female Nightfury to come back with him and let Hiccup help her heal. She is hesitant but agrees, saying goodbye to the other Nightfuries for the time being. On their way back they see signs of Grimmel but never see him or any of his active boats. They reach New Berk and Hiccup names the new Nightfur, lets say Dusk. Toothless tries to tell Hiccup about Grimmel and what he did. Hiccup does not understand and just thinks that Toothless is acting odd because of meeting a female Nightfury. Time passes and Dusk leaves back to the Hidden world without Toothless knowing. Toothless can't handle not being with Dusk so he flys away to find her, only to run into Grimmel who has captured her. Toothless quickly flys back to alert Hiccup, Hiccup sees that there is something wrong and the gang follows after Toothless and Hiccup. They find Grimmel and Hiccup confronts him, thus learning the story of how Grimmel hunted supposedly all Nightfuries. Hiccup immediately notices that Toothless is no longer by his side and distracts Grimmel, then leaving to find Toothless on Stormfly with Astrid. They find a boat with Toothless and Dusk both unconscious. Astrid and Hiccup fight the few people on the boat and rescue Toothless and Dusk. They leave and fly back to where the remaining part of the gang is. They explain that Grimmel had gotten away by injuring Barf and Belch. Hiccup studies the new liquid that immobilized Barf and Belch, only to discover its venom from a Deathknapper. Days pass at New Berk and Toothless takes Hiccup, Stormfly, and Astrid to the Hidden world, Toothless is greeted by the Nightfuries who have learned from Dusk, that Hiccup and his friends are friendly and can be trusted. Hiccup learns that Grimmel did in fact kill lots of Nightfuries but not all of them. Toothless has become the king of the Hidden world at this point, Dusk as his Queen, but know that Grimmel know that there are in fact more NIghtfuries it wont be long until he raids the Hidden world, so they must get to him first. Time passes and finally Grimmel has found New berk and captures Toothless, Hiccup and the gang face Grimmel but know that they can't risk the lives of the others and need more help. Dusk can feel that something is wrong and gathers Nightfuries and other dragons to come help fight with her. They all face Grimmel and save Toothless. Hiccup faces Grimmel alone and same as before, Grimmel falls to his death. Instead of the dragons leaving, some choose to stay and some go to the hidden world, Toothless and Dusk decide to live in both worlds, live many other dragons. The end scene is different, instead of Toothless and the Lightfury and their kids reuniting with Hiccup and Astrid and their kids, Toothless and Dusk are out on a different island watching their kids play. All of the sudden their kids run off out of Toothless' and Dusk's sight. They run after them, only to be greeted by 2 older Nightfuries. Toothless faintly remembers their faces, and they also remember his. It turns out to be Toothless' parents, still searching for their lost and only son.
Orcastration
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Posted: 10/16/2019 at 10:18 PM
Post #2
Intersting rework, it's a good plausible alterante third movie (although I feel like dreamworks just wants kids + parants in their second movies for some reason except maybe kung fu panda, anyne else noticing animation movies like to do that?)
And it actually makes a little more sense in a way XD
Myseri
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Posted: 12/9/2019 at 9:33 PM
Post #3
Woah. I watched all three movies and agree with you. This in a way makes more sense than the original plot. And awesome ideas, by the way!
Rottiegirl
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Posted: 12/9/2019 at 11:33 PM
Post #4
There are a few things that I think would make more sense
For starters, I like the the kind of yin yang with the light and night furies
But there should also be night duties, and some hybrids
At the start of the movie, it says that light cities were his apparently favorite bait. It would make less sense if there were no lightfuries
Vigy
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Posted: 12/10/2019 at 4:37 PM
Post #5
There would still be light furies :)
It's just my idea of how I would prefer it.
Rottiegirl
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Posted: 12/10/2019 at 5:14 PM
Post #6
I feel like some people were secretly hoping for light furies
Sorry if I was judging
Vigy
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Posted: 12/10/2019 at 5:40 PM
Post #7
Nah it's fine :D
I like the Lightfury, but not as Toothless' baby momma.
Rottiegirl
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Posted: 12/10/2019 at 5:46 PM
Post #8
To me I thought it worked
It could be better
For example, ( if both were there) most of the light and night furies could be fighting
Edited By Rottiegirl on 12/10/2019 at 10:46 PM.
Moonia
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Posted: 12/10/2019 at 10:42 PM
Post #9
I like this, why didn't they DO this?!
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