this is my first RP (that i have created) please don't patronize me T^T


you will be sent back in time threw a book and
you will find out what you did back then im seriouse you could be a prince,
a noble man, a lord, a princess, king or even a queen! lets find out your destiny
in this rp You Have To Turn Back!

At school you go to the library because Hell why not! you go in the library and you see a group in the corner by the history books.

you get closer and hear them talking

"are you sure she did that and wasnt kidnapped?" said a boy with gold tipped hair

"yes! im seriouse she vanished INTO a book!" said the girl with odd coloured eyes

"shh theirs an outsider" said a boy with glasses.

you stop and......



From that point it is your desisions that move you forward the available spotts are:

a boy with gold tipped hair

a girl with odd coloured eyes = M3ifwa

a boy with glasses

a girl who 'vanished' = Vampireabiss

the outsider(s) = KandyKittenmeowza, Orca2Whale


aplication

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Sexuality:

Likes:

Dislikes:

Personality:

extra:

Appearance:

other:

bio:

favorite animal: (yes this could change everything)

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PING LIST FOR RP WHEN IT STARTS: KandyKittenmeowza, Orca2Whale, M3ifwa, Vampireabiss

Name: Origin

Age: 15

Gender:male

Sexuality: strait

Likes: sweat treats and happiness

Dislikes: WHAT DOES THIS MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Personality: a nice kid also realy realy smart

extra: he is an outsider. their is always something missing whith his back story. some times he even leaves out stuff when you ask him questions.

Appearance:


other:he has an apple tatoo and people call him Apple

bio:grew up with the mayor and his son but left because of political issues. *well thats the story he tells people anyway*

favorite animal: Fox

I, personally, am not interested, so probably wont be joining, but here's some tips on what you can do for your RPs to help make people want to join:

*Instead of having your intro like this;

*first part*
*second part*
*third part*
, which is a little confusing to read, have your intro like this

*first part*

*second part*

*third part*.
This looks neater, and will give the readers an easier time.

*End on a cliffhanger. People will be more obliged to enter if you make them want to know how it ends.

*Try to avoid a large amount of people. The RP will move to quickly and most of the people will leave as they can't get a single word in without it getting thrown away in the plot. I'd say around 3-5 is the best amount of people for an RP.

*The title is more important than it seems. Your title is great in this case, as it makes people subconsciously curious about why they have to turn back, so try to keep that up if/when you make another RP.

*Bad grammar can turn people away. If you can't help it, that's okay, but keep it in mind.

*Try not to forget about your RP after you've made it. I myself am guilty of this, and it's by far the best way for people to lose interest in the story.

I hope this helps with this RP and any you do later :)

thx for the advice :)

I'll join and interest ping if you want (I'm very active and i've built up a good-sized list of who might want to join ;D)

(Lol ima gonna give poor Nicky a break...here's his counterpart, Lionel ;D)
Name: Lionel Franklin

Age: 16

Gender: male

Sexuality: straight

Likes: fast food, coding, music

Dislikes: awkward silences, dogs

Personality: kinda nerdy but still has friends. Gets nervous easily, and kinda shy around strangers


Appearance: WIP (as in, I don't have one yet ;P)

other: n/A

bio: he has a twin sister, a younger brother. THe sister is a prep girl, the brother is the silent type. He's got a weird relationship with his family though. So he usually hangs at the hardware store or library.

favorite animal: (yes this could change everything) kukabora

welcome

and thx for the tips earlier

you can if you want M3ifwa is also joining she told me this mourning :)

(im only joining because you are my irl friend and i still don't know if you are a girl or a boy XD)

Name: Nai

Age: 16

Gender: female

Sexuality: strait

Likes: ??? *its a mystery*

Dislikes: you, ??? *the rests a mystry XD*

Personality: mystyriousely adorable

extra: a bit of a yandere and a masakist but a realy good school girl

Appearance:

other: girl with odd eyes

bio: you seriously dont want to know

favorite animal: anaconda (realy realy big ones)

Well I did interest ping....but no one replied :P

you shall never learn my secret buddy

thats ok :)

if my rp don't work then it don't work :)