I'm working on a project and started messing around with the design.

This is the original design:


The one I was playing with:

I prefer the tri tails design, it looks less crowded. I'd also suggest you try darkening the yellow on the valentines lace a bit so it is closer to the colour of the flowers, like this:

Hope this is helpful!

Something like this?

Yeah, it's up to you in the end but I really like that.

The darker 'gold' color ties into the other colors a lot better then the lighter 'white gold' looking color.

I like the tri-tails version a lot. My suggestion is that you make the eyes slightly more orangish.
Kinda like this-


Before:



After:


Hope this helps, and if you decide to sell offspring, Id totally be interested!!! =D

I forgot to post a updated image. This is what it'll look like now


It does help thank you and I will be selling offspring once I get the traits to stick and them dyed.

Alright, and youre most welcome ^^