Would anyone mind giving me feedback on my first sylestia fanfic?


Tap Tap Tap. The quick footsteps of a small furry creature ring out in an otherwise silent morning. Frost covers the ground as the suns weakly shines through light grey clouds. Tap Tap Tap. A small furry brown creature quickly scampers through a warm wooden cottage, it's claws****** against the wooden floor. They pass through a small cozy living room with blankets strewn randomly over the furniture and into a carpeted hallway. It runs over to one of the doors which is cracked open, carpet now muffling there footsteps. They push the door open more and slide into the room.

It's a small bedroom with a bed by the west side of the room and a desk facing a southern window. It has a light purple carpet and creme walls. They let out a happy chirp and scamper over to a lump in the bed. It grabs on one of the legs out the bed and quickly scurries up to sit on the lump. It lets out another chirp and begins to paw at the lump.

A grumble sounds out as the lump shifts away from whatever is disrupting their sleep. The creature lets out an amused chitter and begins pawing again. "Noooooooo I wanna sleeeeep" A tired voice whines out. They are ignored.

"Whyyyy Dyre" A head full of periwinkle hair wiggles out of the blankets. A 4'11 girl with blue eyes and freckles turns to the furry being, yawning. Dyre simply lets out a little chitter and begins to snuggle me. I let out a little giggle as her furry body rubs against me.

"Alright gi...." My sentence is cut in half by another yawn.

"-rl, let's get ready." I untangle myself from my nest of blankets and swing my legs over the side of the bed. I stretch my arms up above my head as Dyre crawls into my lap. I scoop her up and begin lazing towards to kitchen.