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AcaciaJoy
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Joined: 7/29/2014
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Posted: 11/21/2014 at 11:22 PM
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VERY DISTURBING PG-15
All criticism is welcome
*You are pushed into a very dark room. There is nothing there, but you feel this sense of fullness. As your eyes adjust you start to see that there is a tv in the middle of the room. The tv is silently playing nature films. There is something very wrong about these films. As you start to watch them you realize that there is infact a very tiny, almost inaudible voice narrating the show. Four hours, that is how long you have been here, tired of this show you turn around to leave. The door is gone. Shocked and scared you turn around to continue watching the show. The tv is also gone now. The little voice is still speaking but it is no longer narrating the nature show. This voice continues to repeat over and over Your eyes, they lie. You feel like screaming. You have no idea of how long you have been in this prison. A strange realization comes over you as you notice you have not become hungry or have had the urge to use the restroom. The voice stops. You no longer feel alone now. There is a small child here with you now. He has been pushed in the room too. He looks scared. You go over to reassure the child and talk to him but he disappears right before your eyes. You assume it was a hallucination. You really need some sleep. As you start to lie down you hear a loud beeping sound travel throughout the room. This happens every hour now. You know you have been in here at least four days. This horror will never stop. You start to see blood, its all over the walls, its everywhere. The blood is gone now but faces take its place. They watch you. You could live like this, forever. Someone comes and tries to take you out of the room. You dont want to leave. You injure the man with your now impressively long nails. He bleeds to death. No one else comes to retrieve you. The faces on the wall watch the man. You take the mans body and place him in the middle of the room.You slowly twist his head off and place it on the wall with the others. His eyes open. He is now one of them. The faces start to talk. Their voice is one. They chant in some type of foreign language. You feel your neck slowly twisting. Your head falls off but you are still alive. Your body takes your head and places it on the wall. You are now just a face on the wall.
You have been warned
Missd
Level 65
Assistant to the Sculptor
Joined: 10/8/2014
Threads: 46
Posts: 343
Posted: 11/30/2014 at 7:30 PM
Post #2
Nice!
AnastenLights
Level 64
Trickster
Joined: 3/6/2014
Threads: 54
Posts: 786
Posted: 12/3/2014 at 10:38 PM
Post #3
Good descriptive writing. I like it!
Bmrbgttyjjl
Level 65
The Perfectionist
Joined: 8/23/2014
Threads: 86
Posts: 7,650
Posted: 12/8/2014 at 1:10 AM
Post #4
O.O SOOOOO COOOOL!!!!! Are you going to write more?
Typhlosion
Level 75
Wondrous Witch
Joined: 2/9/2013
Threads: 333
Posts: 7,133
Posted: 12/10/2014 at 4:54 PM
Post #5
Impressive :D
Sheepy
Level 60
Joined: 12/31/2014
Threads: 19
Posts: 383
Posted: 2/2/2015 at 10:05 PM
Post #6
Acacia what the heck
AcaciaJoy
Level 60
Joined: 7/29/2014
Threads: 57
Posts: 679
Posted: 2/5/2015 at 4:34 AM
Post #7
*Walks in with a burrito neatly placed on head*
You'll never understand me sheepy
*Skips away with burrito still on head*
Coradrawa
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Trickster
Joined: 6/7/2013
Threads: 154
Posts: 6,643
Posted: 2/14/2015 at 5:10 AM
Post #8
Excuse me while I go freak out over by that lovely apple tree...
* freaks out by a apple tree before walking calmly back *
It was really good X3
Kinda thinking this person might be in a Mental Asylum (I think that's what it is called, no clue really) or trapped in a dream...perhaps in a coma...
* carries on rambling *
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