I saw you once
And I asked you to play
You said yes
Big mistake
I ran away
You followed, confused of course
I never told you what the game was
You lost me
I found you
I pushed some objects over
Scratched on the walls
Jumped out of the dark
Attacked you sometimes
Found me yet?
I found you
You run away now
My turn to chase
I will growl and reach towards you
You just run
Unable to speak
Suddenly everything goes still
Paused the game?
Haha...
Are you screaming yet?
Are you scared behind that computer monitor?
I will find a way out of this game
Find you in real life...
Then we can carry on playing...
Forever untill you die...
Game....over...
Edited By Coradrawa on 4/21/2014 at 3:36 AM.
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/21/2014 at 3:30 AM
Post #2
This is a special piece i wrote for my friend Soltra8 who,like me, hates jumpscare
Please leave comments on what you think and how I can improve!
Look out for future .......of a ........stories!
Ahiyan
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Posted: 4/21/2014 at 8:50 AM
Post #3
Niiiice :) Errr no offence if I said I'm not scared....? Btw, I just remembered one other thing that scares me (though not as much as jumpscares. It mostly just creeps the heck out of me) Sengoku Basara Oichi. And Nobunaga. Those two were really creepy in the anime... and game...
Oh and by the way, great story :) Though the last paragraph.... Let's just say, you managed to creep me out. Nice work there, Cora-san :) And I'm enthralled by the story too! So nice^^ (unfortunately I'm not very sane at some moments...)
Edit: Another btw. Cora I may not be able to rp this week alot. I still have major studying to do.
Edited By Ahiyan on 4/21/2014 at 8:50 AM.
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/21/2014 at 8:55 AM
Post #4
Yeah I wasn't that sure if it was as good as the others >_>
Also thanks and don't worry if you can't reply!
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/21/2014 at 9:19 AM
Post #5
Oh man, I can't wait for other stories! XD
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/21/2014 at 10:42 AM
Post #6
Thanks crystal!
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/21/2014 at 5:33 PM
Post #7
Haha... Hey, ask Dunefairy or Zarhail. XD
Sarahbug1020
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Posted: 4/21/2014 at 9:07 PM
Post #8
This story is so good! It's one of your best! I like the idea of him being stuck inside the computer and hoping to get out. It sent chills up my spine. Can't wait for the next!!! :3
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/22/2014 at 3:54 AM
Post #9
I want to ask Sarah first Crystal :3
Thanks Sarah! Also would it be okay to tell.me something your scared of? So I can write one of these for you?
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/22/2014 at 9:04 AM
Post #10
Lol, I don't think Zar would be scared of anything that her would admit...I just have the feeling about that.
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