A friend requested me a picture of a couple sitting on a bench just touching hands, with sweat drops for some reason and a blush all in black and white(added different shadings of grey to make certain things noticeable), I couldn't help but make a bright red heart and added background to make it seem less empty but how do you guys think I did with their request? Anything I should change?

I want this to be perfect ;n;



Thank you so much for looking at this and maybe even suggesting how to make it better or if it's fine ;u;

EDIT: (current changes added to picture)

.put girls butt actually on bench correctly
.added more shades of grey
.changed style sweat drop
.smoothed out faces
.longer legs
.bend right arm of male
.knees bend before end of bench
.bench lowered around girls shoulder
.fix arms(to do)

The knees are a bit low, making the legs seem ill portioned. Mebe also make them longer so they look like they touch the floor. :3 ur art is doing nicely btw.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=13319&page=1#2 Author: Kinuna Time Posted: 4/17/2014 at 4:27 PM The knees are a bit low, making the legs seem ill portioned. Mebe also make them longer so they look like they touch the floor. :3 ur art is doing nicely btw.

Oh gosh now I see it >.>
Thanks for making me notice and thanks for the compliment :)

love that streetlight and lantern, it's so pretty. Also the red heart is very cute~ All the objects look great.

I have a few suggestions for the humans.
- Have the knees start before the bench ends (can vary a bit); ref1
- Have the man's left arm (his left, our right) bend the other way; ref2
- lower the height of the bench to go slightly lower than where the girl's shoulders start.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=13319&page=1#4 Author: Taptothebeat Time Posted: 4/17/2014 at 9:38 PM love that streetlight and lantern, it's so pretty. Also the red heart is very cute~ All the objects look great. I have a few suggestions for the humans. - Have the knees start before the bench ends (can vary a bit); ref1 - Have the man's left arm (his left, our right) bend the other way; ref2 - lower the height of the bench to go slightly lower than where the girl's shoulders start.

Thanks so much for taking the time to look at this and say these great suggestions that I will put to use and I think you make the second reference maybe?

Anyways thanks so much this helps a lot :)

I'm glad it helped ^///^
I'm impressed by how quickly and flawlessly you made those edits :o

I have 1 last suggestion, though you are probably going to kill me now because it has to deal with the guy's left arm xD
Though his arm is bending the right way now, it is too long D:
I suggest making it a bit shorter and then making the girl's arms (both) a bit longer, so the two can still touch hands. I think that will help with the proportions of the girl as well.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=13319&page=1#6 Author: Taptothebeat Time Posted: 4/19/2014 at 11:31 AM I'm glad it helped ^///^ I'm impressed by how quickly and flawlessly you made those edits :o I have 1 last suggestion, though you are probably going to kill me now because it has to deal with the guy's left arm xD Though his arm is bending the right way now, it is too long D: I suggest making it a bit shorter and then making the girl's arms (both) a bit longer, so the two can still touch hands. I think that will help with the proportions of the girl as well.

I was hoping nobody would notice the arm lengths XD
*was feeling to lazy to fix arms after noticing they were odd looking after taking a while just trying to figure out how to bend it*

But I will fix that too since you noticed ^^'
*drat XD*

Ok I've run out of time to fix things up thanks for the help with what could be done

it looks great!