I'd love any feedback before submissions ^.^

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=70149&page=27#268 Author: Shayni Time Posted: 12/10/2018 at 11:15 PM S H A Y ' S D E S I G N S U B M I S S I O N S *all are either winter scenes, animals associated with winter, derived from winter songs, or winter plants* Garter Snake Aeridini Pristine Pine Aurleon Japanese Quince Bulbori Northern Goshawk Draeyl Frozen Lake Faelora Ferrikki Turtle Dove Griffi Kelpari Lighira Luffox Birch Lunemara Frosted Window Lupora Sharp Sleet Morkko Lit Cinnamon Candle Nephini Red Fox Ny'vene Nytekrie Snow Bunting Puffadore Qitari Ryori Sylvorpa Turtle Dove Vulnyx Wild Caribou Zolnixi

Above, thanks :3

((Osore is now Vigil I think?))

I really like your gardner snake aeridini

Thank you :)

So a couple of weeks ago, I was trying to make a aeridini without bright colors, and I ended up kind of proud of it, but I found an aeridini design contest that wanted 6 visible traits, and really like it now. It'd be great to have suggestions on the design:

Username: ShadowHunter0913
Nickname: Shadow
Favorite Species: Zolnixi
Favorite Color: Blood Red and Pitch Black
Amount of Designs: Not a lot, but I get inspired easily!
Why I want to join: I want to join mostly to share my ideas and see what I can improve on, but I also love seeing other peoples designs as well!

Hey this looks interesting.


User: Eyelashviper (the Eyelashviper from the Anxiety club)
Nickname: Eye, Eyelash, Viper (more common)
Favorite Sylesti Species: ZOLNIXI
Fave cover: 1blue 2pink 3purple OOF
Amount of designs:13 or 14 saved designs but way more created ones
Why I want to join: Well, I like making designs

I am <3

Love the name <3

*These are my personal nitpick's so you don't have to follow them

Overall these are all super cool and unique designs! Honestly all of them have really wonderful themes and ideas behind them, so here's a couple of thing's I noticed with the colors:

Pristine Pine: Possibly add darker greens? Pine trees have really dark greens, the yellow tips usually appear on needles when they're starting to wilt. The male could have some more contrast on the greens, the female should have something to balance out all the cheerful (very wonderful) yellow.

Northern Goshawk: adding more tan/beige? Though adding tan might defeat the magical look you've achieved. The male more than the female since the Moth Wings really make the yellow more obvious.

Northern Lights: How colorful are you trying to be? Many Northern Light's are 3-4 toned, I see greens and yellows, but mostly blues. Possibly try to jazz up the blues with more contrast? Or darker blues? Maybe add a bit more green/yellow on the body, maybe a purple accent?

Birch:Birch's have black-dark brown stippling, and paler bark (so maybe lighten it?) so find a pattern that suits that somehow? At the moment it looks more like a dogwood in fall than a birch

Red Fox:I think you could make the oranges more vibrant? It is a red fox, or make the dark oranges that are shown more prominent? The Dark orange is the 2-3rd color that catches my eye in both designs

Caribou: Again more tan, but only if it's supposed to be a realistic caribou then just ignore all my comments about the yellow. The Yellow makes a way better contrast color than another brown, which might be your point for all I know XD