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Name: Emrald (Em) Takis
Username: PineForestFire23
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Experiment number: 5306918
Type of Experiment: Animal
Description of changes due to experiment: She has wings like a tawny screech owl, so therefore she can fly, although she cannot hide them very well yet, and has a hard time being in public without drawing stares. She has the teeth, a sense of smell, hearing, taste, basically all the senses of a tiger. She has one black tiger eye and one yellowish owl one.
Characters Appearance:
Description of Personality: Em is optimistic and kind and always smiling, and she has a hard time sitting still for very long. She is hard-headed and likes to play pranks on the scientists whenever she has a chance. She has tried to escape to many times to count, and a couple times she came very close, but obviously, never quite all the way.
What is your character good at: Spying, Running, Pranking, Flying
What are some faults and fears: She can't hide her wings, she is hard-headed, and she is terrified of spiders (Cliche, I know)
Example paragraph: Em shivered, curling on the floor of the retched cage in a fetal position, her arms wrapped around her middle to conserve whatever heat she has left in her tiny 10-year-old body. Her brown-blonde hair was dirty and fluffed up around her face in a frizzy halo, but she didn't bother to reach up and smooth it down. In fact, she barely noticed it. Her back was stinging painfully, although at the moment she didn't know what had happened to make it that way. A screech of the bars of her cage tempted her to turn her head just enough to see a white lab-coated scientist walking into her cage to pick her up and bring her back to the lab. She would have fought him, maybe bitten him, anything to free herself from his grasp, but she didn't have enough mental or physical strength to even open her mouth. Instead, she hung limp in his arms and folded herself into the blackness, praying that her nightmare would be over when she opened them again that she would open her eyes and be back with mommy and pappy, with the smell of Sunday-morning pancakes wafting around her. Needless to say, next time she opened her eyes, she wasn't home in her warm, comfortable bed. She was strapped to a cold, metal table, surrounded by scientists with sharp-looking objects held in their gloved hands. One of them smiled when he saw her eyes open again, and started to walk toward her, his hands held out towards her in an attempt at a comforting gesture.
And Em was terrified.
Anything else you want to say?: I don't think so

Name: Jack Marmay
Username: PineForestFire23
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Experiment number: 6928173
Type of Experiment: Technological
Description of changes due to experiment: He is half-human half scrap-metal sculpture. His one metal eye and metal hands can melt anything he touches or looks at, and he can shoot rays of light/fire/laser things out of his hands. He also runs faster and is much stronger than normal humans. Like Em, though, he can't hide it from humans easily.
Characters Appearance(or a picture): Just imagine half-and-half, half human half machine
Description of Personality: Hard-headed and determined, he holds a mean grudge, but at the same time he wants to save the world. He never leaves anyone in peril, but he also does not talk very often, and he is a good leader. He is disgusted with his metal half and tries never to use it if he can help it.
What is your character good at: Fighting, Creating Clever Plans, and Persuasion
What are some faults and fears: He wants to save everybody, He hates his metal half, and he is terrified of water because it will short-circuit his metal side
Example paragraph: Can I use Em's a second time? I have to go to bed.....
Anything else you want to say?: Don't think so

Pretty good so far...though Jack shooting fire/lasers/ect. and being able to melt ANYTHING... Well... Only got to change that. Aaand... You forgot 'the word". XD *Hint Hint* And if you can, try to do Jack's paragraph tomorrow if you can... Besides that, pretty good.

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ok, new number: 0217010