Frisky
Looking into the paths, he notices the solid one. "Mia, come!" He says proudly, and shoots through the right path. The one in the middle. It led a slant upward, and soon a new challenge arose. They were being, followed, Frisky knew it. But he hoped he and Mia could get high before it revealed itself. The branches began their usual breaking again

(im going to go to sleep now, its getting rather late)
Mia follows, close behind him, unaware of their pursuer.

Frisky
Leading Mia up the bridge, the monster jeaps before him and snarls. Frisky yells, and pulls Mia under it quickly. It snacks his scab, making him bleed heavily.

As Sol was thinking about her parents, memories flooded back of times she thought would last forever. Which led her to thinking of the endless possibilities of what could have happened to them. 'Maybe they tried to come back and fell? They could've died up here because of the lack of food and water. Or is there something else up here? Maybe they just didn't care as much as I thought they did. Maybe they thought I was old enough to fend for myself...' These thoughts went on as tears formed in her eyes. Hiding her face in Vormund's fur, she quietly cried. Not only thinking about her parents, but everyone else's pain too. (I just thought she was handling this all too well, she seemed a bit too happy for the situation.)

Mia shouts, seeing large amounts of blood pouring from his head wound.
"I cant belive i didn't notice your wound earlier!" Mia shouts, upset and frightened.
Mia slides back under the monster, and tries to kick it away from them.

Frisky
"It is okay as long as we are fast!" Frisky hopes Mia is behind him, rushing till the Higher Lands are in sight. Then, the monster leaps between them and the land. Last time this happened, Frisky lost an ear. "Mia... stay as far away from the monster as possible, and when I get close to it jump!" Frisky says, rushing forward in hopes he did not pass out on the bridge. He was beginning to get very dizzy, and his eyesight was blurring.

Kat yawns and walks back. "Anyone want to try them? I don't know if we can eat them or not." She holds out the thing of berries. The stag sniff the bucket then turns away, not wanting the bad taste in its mouth.

(how did amazon manage to do this, they broke my backspace button. i have to wait 2 secconds between each character)
She sees how wobbly and unfocused Frisky is getting. Mia strongly belives that he will die if she dosnt do anything, hes lost so much blood. At the least, he will pass out, Mia reasons. But, she will do what hes telling her to do. She sees it as his dying wish.
She waits for Frisky to get close to the beast.

(I MAY have to make Frisky a spirit. Not physically alive, but Bella might see signs on where to go and what to do set by him.. Like, if any of you have read Seekers. Ujurack? Anyway, signs in the trees, and like that. If you guys have not guessed, I have a storyline on the brink)

Frisky
With the last of his strength, Frisky dashed forward. He knew he had lost to much blood to live anymore. Getting the beast's attention, he took the pack from his back and threw it over onto the Higher Lands. Then, the beast snapped around his waist with it's huge jaws and Frisky stopped breathing. He looked forward blankly at the Higher Lands inches from his feet. He could not make it a second time. Frisky saw everything in slow motion, Mia had to make it. She had to continue delivering his healing supplies to the shelter. At least he had kept his promise. Frisky watched his world go black

(Oh stars I killed him O.o)