(Alright I found the chat room, maybe now I won't be so far behind. Again I'm severely sorry if I managed to ruin the story you guys had planned, I just didn't know what you had in mind.)

Neptune

Laid on the side of the pant, panting with exhausting with her own claws still extended after climbing out. Her body was aching from the growth spur of her tiny body. A small mew left her lips with her eyes closed tightly. Her body quivered of what had happen with her fuzzy tail curled up against her flank. Why was I put in that thing? It felt funny and yet painful... I...I don't wanna open my eyes again. Will Mommy still there and daddy? She thought to herself with her little mouth open with her tongue sticking out. Her ears even laid against her skull with another soft mew sound.

Deimos




I would feel a bit groggy, shaking the pain off easily. Errmmmm....that wasn't pleasant, but i'm pretty sure mom and dad know what they are doing.... I'd think, being a bit tired.

Everything was again the same, he was alone just like before. The only sound he heard was that of his own hooves as they hit the ground. Click, click, click. It was almost soothing, almost yet the eerie silence that droned in his ears was still there whispering sweet nothings in his ear. Veshch had never felt this bad in his whole life, there was a sense of abandonment deep with in him as he continued through the deep of the woods. No longer did he know in which he searched, only that what ever it was had yet to be found. The wound in his leg prevented him from going any faster than a walk, yet that was fast enough to take him from the situation he was in. It was strange, he almost had feelings for the little creatures he met, like he was their guardian of sorts. Now he had left them simply because he cared for them and wanted their life to be one full of happiness, no the gloom and despair that seemed to radiate from him. The thing they used to call him, the thing it has returned! Run run for your lives! Hide the children and your wives, don't lt the monster find them. His name even ment thing in a distant younge no one knew yet. Veshch stopped from where he was walking, who was he trying to fool no one could ever love him he was just going to have to die alone. A single tear fell from his pupiless eye and splashed on the ground leaving a lit glowing pool in its wake. For once even the monster seemed afraid of himself.

(Just going to point something out. I think you got confused in that scene because Lucent was not near Storm's dead body, he was on the way. Doggo wasn't supposed to had known what happened either because they hadn't found her yet is all. But to answer your question, I would have asked what happened. This is a biased answer, however, because I see things differently than Doggo and I did not think Lucent was a shady character. Storm didn't act hostile toward him at first either but that is because they were friends as cubs so she already knew him.

On the other hand, I don't hold anything against you for the confusion. I wrote my text wall because I didn't know if you had noticed those things and I thought you had a right to know. There is one more thing I would like to say before we move on, though; RPing isn't always something natural or easy. When I first started I got into a heap of trouble. I was also five or six years younger, very immature, aggressive, and defensive. Those raging habits stuck sadly... But that is aside the point. I learned how to handle, add, and play my characters the hard way. I made characters that resembled myself, and therefore if a character fought with mine, I felt like I was fighting with the user playing it.

It got to my head and confused me. That is most of the reason why I am so strict with talking about my characters as their own self. If I say "I was friends with Lucent as a cub" rather than "Storm was friends with Lucent as a cub" I would not only get way protective over Lucent but Lunarius as well. I had to learn to distance myself from my characters while still seeing into their heads and knowing how to handle them. You are not alone with the difficulties of RPing :) I know that sticking to it and reading other's posts as well as your own can unconsciously influence your writing, and a little bickering outside the story can give you new ideas. You've been around longer than me and you've RPed a bit more on sylestia, I was a big RPer on Monster Kingdom (iPhone app) I guess what I am trying to say is mistakes are all about learning and improving, no one can blame you for making one or two, but we can try and help out. Sometimes the help isn't direct, and you might not notice it for years, but it is there.)

Storm
I swish my tail along the cave floor to curve around my feet, He invaded my territory. He... He could have hurt our cubs. Our cubs! I leap over and nuzzle each one,
"Welcome to the world, little ones." I purr, licking the cold water from their pelts and nudging them to their feet. "You, little one, you look just like me. I would name you Mercury." I rub my nose against the cub with the bushy tail. And you, you look like a whole new creature. Truly beautiful, you will be Neptune." I rub my cheek against the cheek of the cub with the curled tail. What would you like to name the boy? He looks just like you!

Lucent




I'd chuckle. "I'll call him Deimos. Which was supposed to be my name until my species took it and i named myself lucent." I'd say, looking down at the male cub.





Deimos



I'd listen, my ears twitching a bit. I wonder if i'll be like my father...with that name. I'd walk over, kind of tired, and lean against him,

A strange little purr sound could be heard as she felt her mother grooming the cold water from her pelts. She slowly got to her feet, wobbling at first with her eyes slowly opening to gaze up to her mother. A soft smile played upon her muzzle with a tilt of her head to place her muzzle against her mother's cheek. Neptune... I like that name... Her grey eyes gaze up to her mother with a happy look before gazing over to her sister and brother. She blinked her eyes before gazing up to her mother again. "N...N...Nepwune?" Her head tilted to the side with a cute look.

Mercury
With some of the cold licked away I pull myself to my feet and look at my fur, just a little creamier than my mom's. My ears and tail take after my father while the rest of me is almost my mom's replica. Mercury... I like that name. My wings, I unfold them from my side and jump into the air, but I just land on my feet with a huff of disappointment.

Lucent



I'd sigh, as i picked up Deimos with my wing, a bit harder than before, and put him on my back. "They must be tired...." I'd say, yawning a bit myself. "Do you want me to carry any other of the cubs?" I'd ask Storm.





Deimos



I'd sigh, feeling picked up and against my father's pelt. I'd nudge against it and yawn, watching everybody else's movements.