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Watercolors
Level 74
The Artistic
Joined: 1/29/2015
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Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:32 PM
Post #721
(Okay I didn't think I had to say this but I am. This is my world, I made it, and I gave things to my characters for them to hold like we have our homes and our possessions. Your character has complete freedom to find their own special place, but the aging pool is something I created for Storm. That is something I chose to do, because I have that choice just like you do. You can give the bull a healing pool, a rock of strengthening, I really don't care. But please, please don't takeover what I came up with okay? It is not enjoyable at all...)
Watercolors
Level 74
The Artistic
Joined: 1/29/2015
Threads: 132
Posts: 2,481
Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:35 PM
Post #722
Storm
I snarl at him, barring my teeth. I will take you any day, you slab of conceded meat. I speak only so Lucent can hear, though my words are meant for the bull, I don't want to get into a fight while my cubs are near. I gently scoot them into the pool one by one, watching them glow with astonishing white light.
Rikaheart
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 5/11/2016
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Posts: 939
Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:35 PM
Post #723
She whimpers as she curls up more as her father covered her ears. She mew lightly before snuggling more into his fur, staying where she is safe. She rubbed her face against his fur innocently until her mother made her slip into the strange water.
Edited By Rikaheart on 7/5/2016 at 3:36 PM.
Hawke
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/7/2013
Threads: 324
Posts: 16,550
Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:37 PM
Post #724
(Sorry I didn't mean to upset you I just feel like I don't have apart in this role play. All my characters keep getting shunned by the others or forgotten. Veshch is out in the river killing monsters while no one wonders about him, Solstice is sitting in the middle of a cave thinking to herself about how Howlite and Twister left her, Doggo is stuck in the swamp, and Quake is dead. I just don't know what else to do, so I threw in a character in a place that your creatures always end up.)
Lunarius
Level 60
Joined: 6/21/2016
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Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:38 PM
Post #725
Lucent
I'd gently take the cub on my back, kind of sad that i deprived her of her resting place, but i went ahead and sank her into the pool with her siblings, her glowing as well.
Rikaheart
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 5/11/2016
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Posts: 939
Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:45 PM
Post #726
Cub's form started to shift, growing a bit older within the pool. Her eyes opened more now with her ears twitching. She shifted her weight with her body aching with smaller wings had soon appeared on her back. Slowly She would start to climb out with her small sleek body, feeling exhausted as her energy was drained.
OOC:
Not sure if this okay or not.
Hawke
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
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Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:49 PM
Post #727
The bull watched them before leaving the cave. He snorted again not watching where he was going as he stepped from the cave. Brandy's hooves slipped sending him sliding forward into the bed of ice like spikes. He cried out as the ice spikes sliced through his body, ending his long life.. "Who-who ever thought it would end like this." He grunted gasping for breath as he bled out.
Lunarius
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Joined: 6/21/2016
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Posts: 736
Posted: 7/5/2016 at 3:53 PM
Post #728
Lucent
I'd hear brady slip and fall and i would turn to storm. "Stay here, make sure the pup's don't leave." I'd say before running out and flying down, and then above brady, with a sad face. "I'm sorry my friend, i didn't think that it would end this fast..."
Deimos
I'd feel myself start to change, like i'm getting...bigger? I would look to my left, seeing my two other sister's growing as well...i'd be lying saying that i didn't enjoy this change, but it was really strange...
Watercolors
Level 74
The Artistic
Joined: 1/29/2015
Threads: 132
Posts: 2,481
Posted: 7/5/2016 at 4:08 PM
Post #729
(I have been repeatedly offering things to you. You can have a part in the roleplay without causing fights among the characters. I am not upset, just a bit annoyed is all. Fighting characters is not fun for me. Storm has a strong-willed personality and will protect anything that is hers to the death, but that isn't a trait I want to argue with..
As for feeling left out, maybe look outside the box. I will sum things up a little; The RPers have become skeptical. We want to RP with you, but we are unsure of what you might do next. It started with Solstice. She is a great character and I love her, her personality is awesome. It is just the way she came in seemed a bit forceful. While reading each others posts you would see a character build between Lucent and Storm, Solstice just kind of popped up and the way she seemed to have a hidden meaning was unsettling for more players than one...
The second strike was Quake's attack. I didn't say anything to you because I was trying to take it easy on you, I have noticed your character's exclusion and if you ask Rika or Lunar I have tried to help multiple times... What I didn't say was that seemed really personal. I was worried, and I don't think it was only me, that Quake attacked Lucent because you was upset that Solstice didn't pull through with Lucent. The frustration is understandable, and I know you were just trying to find a way to be included. I only saw the near-death seen of that attack, and as I get attached to characters, it had me shaky the whole night I was out with friends. I was very upset at first, but it passed after I calmed down. Things just get to my head at times.
Anyway, after Quake the other users have been worried about whatever hostile character you introduce. I think we would all rather the conflict center around natural disasters than character grudges. I want all of my RPers to feel included and have fun with my RP, I try to help as much as I can and I try my very hardest to stay neutral and calm, but things to add up over time and eventually I need to explain. I hope I haven't offended you so far, I am just trying to color the picture and maybe give you an insight as to why you seem to be pushed back.
Third strike, Brady. (Or Brandy, I can never remember...) So I was ready to work with it, Storm might be a bit hot-headed and blunt but I was excited. However, there are areas of the map that I have laid personal claim on. I did give everyone the right to build and dream up their own obstacles on the map, so I made the aging pool for my characters to use, guide others to, and protect. I hope you can understand how having another character repeatedly strike your's down about it would push your buttons? It wasn't just me getting frustrated either, I had another user come to me with a bit of a complaint about it as well.
It all adds up to a bit more respect. A bit more attention to detail. I still want you to RP with us because I think you are a great writer with creative ideas, but I need to ask you the favor and respect me a little more. I am hosting this fantasy world and I put time and effort into my writing so my characters have... Well, character. Personality, depth, backstory, purpose? I know you do too, your characters are all unique and personalized. I have been doing my best to add them in, if you don't remember, Tumble is Doggo's friend. Britters and I pre-planned Tumble's story though, and she had to leave. I didn't mean to shun Doggo. When Storm came back through the lunar power, Lunar and I expected Doggo to stick around. However, Doggo's persistence on Lucent being a murderer drove him off. The arguing was not enjoyable for Lunarius so he put an end to it, see?
Twister and Howlite have been planning their story as well. I knew they were going to find the underwater city. Storm and Lucent have a story that me and Lunarius have been building over a mini chat that we have yet to execute. It is all a matter of cooperation. Some things I wanted to happen Lunar didn't like, so I suggested something else happen so we would both have fun. This is because I respect Lunar's want to enjoy the roleplay just like I do.
I offered you a cub so you could be in on this because I felt bad that people were pairing off and you were left hanging. You denied this, however, and having too many characters is something I have encountered as well. If you have Doggo find Lachlan they could have a story maybe, but you have kept Doggo stuck in the mud... You would have to be patient though. Britters is a mother without a laptop. She is doing her best to RP with us but sometimes she just has too much on her plate. Her posts are long and detailed though, definitely worth the wait. If you have even more patience I am sure Veshch could befriend Ophelia, but as me and Britters's plan unfolds she is going to appear to love Torch. It is all pre-planning.
So again, ^There are some ideas for you. I don't want to upset you in anyway shape or form but I couldn't go any longer without bringing these things to attention. I hope my words can be seen as advice and not hostility, I am just speaking from experience and observation. Please don't give up on your characters, with a little plot-development I am sure they will fit right in.)
Hawke
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/7/2013
Threads: 324
Posts: 16,550
Posted: 7/5/2016 at 4:12 PM
Post #730
"Nor did I." The bull huffed, taking his last breaths. "Can you promise me that you will protect her? My daughter. I'm sorry I lied to you, that was not my pool to begin with, I was only there to protect my first born." Brandy closed his eyes. "Can you not tell her of this?"
She watched as the lion things grew once they hit the water. It looked like fun! Though her dad told her not to play in it. Sara slowly crawled out from where she was hiding, desperate to get a good look at the Cubs. Maybe just a small dip wouldn't hurt? Slowly she put one hoof into the water a quickly took it out. Her eyes closed as she felt pain, then she opened them again finding herself having grown. Her back was starting to form crystals now and her horns were being to grow. "What, what happened?"
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