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"No ma'am, not yet. I was waiting for Solarpaw, but she took a robin and instantly went to the den to sleep! And I'm not to hungry, despite not eating yesterday because I haven't gone training at all today. I caught a mouse but that was the only time I left camp Redpaw shook himself, remembering how Solarpaw twitched and mewed in her sleep. He would wake her up, but didn't, out of fear.
Solarpaw gasped in surprise as Ravenfur slashed a claw down Solarpaw's cheek. Since she was not good at fighting, she'd been dodging the whole time. Solarpaw let out a yelp as Ravenfur tackled her and began to hit her with his paws. Solarpaw yelped, before Tigersun bellowed, Enough!" Ravenfur bounced away from Solarpaw with ease, while Solarpaw got to her paws, covered in mud. Ravenfur cleared his throat, and another cat emerged from the shadows. He was a grey tabby, covered in scars. Another cat melted into the clearing, a brown tom with black paws.

Whitefeather stood from the clearing, covering the tiny mouse's bone and padding over to the apprentice den to check up on his apprentice, he wanted to make sure she wasn't going insane form Greencough or some other thing.

There was mud on Solarpaw's nest, and she had a thin trickle of blood on her cheek. In the Dark Forest, Solarpaw was fighting two cats at one time. She was dodging left and right, which was the only thing she was good at in battle. Tigersun snarled, "FIGHT THEM SOLARPAW! PRETEND THEY TRIED TO KILL REDPAW!!" Solarpaw hissed at Ravenfur as he lunged at her, "Touch my brother and you're dead!" Turns put she said this in her sleep, yet she said it quietly.

(Could you change Redpaw's font color it is very hard to read)

Beetlestar nodded, "Would you like to join me on a small territory marker check after I finish this rabbit?" The leader asked.

{Okay.}}
Redpaw nodded. "That'd be great!"

Beetlestar purrs and begins to eat the rabbit, swallowing in big gulps. Soon she finishes and licks her paw wiping her face. "Let's go." She tells the apprentice as she crawls out of the bracken.

Redpaw's eyes widened in excitement. "C-coming!" {Redpaw just gained a crush. Darn}

"Solarpaw? You okay?" He called from outside the apprentice's den.

Ravenfur loomed over Solarpaw, his huge claws unsheathed, before she dissipated. Ravenfur hissed as Tigersun tackled him. "Had Whitefeather not woke her up you were going to kill her!" Tigersun roared in his face. Ravenfur nodded. "The weak deserve to die." At this Tigersun roared loudly again, then slashed his claws down Ravenfur's throat and stomach.
Solarpaw woke up with a yelp. A small trickle of blood dropped down her cheek, and mud covered her fur. "I-I'm fine. I just, um, didn't tell anyone but my nest is all muddy? Y-Yeah. And I guess there is a thorn in the moss too?" Solarpaw lied. "I didn't want to seem rude on my first day of being an apprentice." Solarpaw made a face. That didn't really sound like her at all!!