Edited By Navisparkles101 on 9/27/2017 at 3:39 PM.
Navisparkles101
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Posted: 9/27/2017 at 3:38 PM
Post #66
Name:
Aurora Fletcher
Gender:
Female
Age:
16
Appearance:
Personality:
Aurora is rather feisty and free-spirited, and is rather hard to control. Most people assume it's because she is a 'fire-head', but, it's just the way she is. You rarely ever see her calm side, unless you are someone rather close to her.
History: Not much is known of Aurora and where she came from. People say that she was brought into the kingdom during Onyx's reign - along with the rest of her family - as a slave. No one knew that she would soon control the blazing gemstone: Garnet.
Her family was put to death after they had tried to kill some of Onyx's guards, leaving Aurora orphaned. She contained the fiery spirit the her parents past onto her. At the age of 14, strange things would happen to her. Every time she grew mad, the temperature would grow so hot, that wooden posts would catch fire.
Finally, the secret committee brought her in, and told her that she controlled the gemstone Garnet, which had the ability to control the sun at will. To this day, she uses the sun as her weapon, each step she takes burning a foot sized hole in the pavement.
Gemstone:
Garnet
Other:
~She's an orphan.
~She's a bit of a thief and will often steal stuff from the marketplace.
~She hates water and cloudy days since it blocks the sun.
Edited By Navisparkles101 on 9/27/2017 at 4:16 PM.
Aquila
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Posted: 9/27/2017 at 4:03 PM
Post #67
Gosh, your character has a lot of power, can you please change that? I don't like people being to OP.
Navisparkles101
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Posted: 9/27/2017 at 4:06 PM
Post #68
Alright, what would you like me to change?
Aquila
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Posted: 9/27/2017 at 4:10 PM
Post #69
The part about her being able to create rainbows, since that is pearl's job? And the hair-catching-on-fire, as we already have a fire controller. Garnet controls the rising and falling of the sun.
Edited By Aquila on 9/27/2017 at 4:11 PM.
Navisparkles101
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Posted: 9/27/2017 at 4:16 PM
Post #70
Alright, I changed it. Is it better, now?
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