All I did was edit a few words and add some stuff. XD Not much of a plot edit since all I did was change the timelines a but. :/

1. after many long years of harsh abuse, you decide to run away. You wander the streets for months, fending for your self, finding food, shelter all that survival stuff. So you decided to run away and start a new life somewhere else. After several months of wandering the intimidating city, you meet a group of people with similar background stories like yours. You soon become fast friends. About two years after meeting each other, something unfortunate happens. The girl who first started the group is hit by a car. The driver gets out, and helps you get her to a hospital. Despite the the doctors' best efforts, she slips into a deep coma. The doctor tells you, your friends, and the driver that she may not make it through the night. Mike (the guy who accidentally hit your friend) offers you and your friends a place to stay for the night. He says to you that he is willing to let you stay untill you can support yourself, as long as you help him harvest his apple orchards, and care for the horses he own.

Its been almost three months, since the accident. You visit your friend on the weekends. The doctors are doing the best they can. But nothing seems to work. One day while your visiting her, the heart monitor starts to show flat line. The doctor's manage to get a faint heartbeat, but they say she may not make it through the night. You sit down in the chair, absorbing the shocking news you just found out.

Its been about two years, since the dreadful accident. One day, you receive a call from the hospital, saying your friend is finally awake. You rush to the hospital and, there she is, sitting up and awake. But the only thing that's different. She talks to you, yet she does not look at you when she does. A doctor takes you aside and says "Bella may not ever be able to see again. We can try and give her partial eye sight, but that is all."

I luv it!!!


Btw, its not kisa uma its kiso uma.

Er, thankies!

*throws ipad out* Bad ipad. XD And ok, kiso Uma! :D
Edit-when can we start rping? :)

Whenever is fine

btw I will hsve the horses set up tommorow. I has a plan that involves over night thinking

Ok. I'm finishing one more character anyways. XD can't wait to see your idea!

I cant wait to see your new charecter

Ah, he's in my other post on oage five. His names Raiden. :D he is a bad boy >.> lol

Ok, I'm done and my eyes are falling out. Goodnight! I'm going to bed. -.-"

Im going to create z new place for everyone to rpg at. I will post the link in a minute

Ok, m just adding a. Little more description to raiden