"I'm not supposed to tell you..." he sighed though. "But I suppose I shall. I still have seven left. And now it feels like such a waste- while I can survive six more deaths I lost my best friend who sacrificed herself for her clan."

(Keeping note of his deaths- 1) Sickness, only the med cat knows 2) battle with a fox on the Journey to EchoClan)

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=56653&page=54#531 Author: Shayni Time Posted: 1/28/2018 at 3:09 PM "I'm not supposed to tell you..." he sighed though. "But I suppose I shall. I still have seven left. And now it feels like such a waste- while I can survive six more deaths I lost my best friend who sacrificed herself for her clan." (Keeping note of his deaths- 1) Sickness, only the med cat knows 2) battle with a fox on the Journey to EchoClan)

"Next time I see those dogs, they'll lose every single little strand of fur, so that they look like hairless kittens." Jaypaw snarled. Then he turned to Ravenstar. "I maybe be a meany, and a complete fox heart sometimes... but I'm still loyal to my clan. If I have to die like Burrshadow did, it would be worth it. I'm loyal to my clan, even if it may seem otherwise sometimes."

"None of us ever doubted your loyalty, Jaypaw." He stood, flicking his white tipped tail again, showing how irate he was at the dogs. "But you need to calm yourself sometimes. If you keep disobeying my rules, you may end up dying for a careless reason, not for out clan. I try to keep you all safe." He tilted his head toward the ledge. "But you are ready, now. Jaypaw, would you like to become a warrior of this clan?"

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=56653&page=54#533 Author: Shayni Time Posted: 1/28/2018 at 3:17 PM "None of us ever doubted your loyalty, Jaypaw." He stood, flicking his white tipped tail again, showing how irate he was at the dogs. "But you need to calm yourself sometimes. If you keep disobeying my rules, you may end up dying for a careless reason, not for out clan. I try to keep you all safe." He tilted his head toward the ledge. "But you are ready, now. Jaypaw, would you like to become a warrior of this clan?"

Jaypaw's eyes widened. "M-me? A warrior?" Jaypaw stammered. Then he nodded.
{{Can his warrior name be Jayclaw, like Tigerclaw? Jaypaw wouldn't ever change his loyalty, but he reminds me of him in some way or another. Ooh, or Jayshadow, after Burrshadow?}}

((I like Jayshadow and it seems different! :o))

"Yes. You have proved loyalty. Too much loyalty, in fact." His eyes showed slight amusement, though the grief he was trying to hide was still visible. "I'm even considering that you get two vigils as a punishment," he joked weakly.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=56653&page=54#535 Author: Shayni Time Posted: 1/28/2018 at 3:33 PM ((I like Jayshadow and it seems different! :o)) "Yes. You have proved loyalty. Too much loyalty, in fact." His eyes showed slight amusement, though the grief he was trying to hide was still visible. "I'm even considering that you get two vigils as a punishment," he joked weakly.

Jaypaw laughed, then playfully waved a paw. "Oh no, the horror! And don't be sad," Jaypaw smiled at Ravenstar. "Just smile! You have a whole clan of cats who more or less feel the same. Show them it's okay."

"Getting advice from an apprentice." Ravenstar smiled. "Someday, I'd like you to mentor one of my kits. Dreamit's personality would match yours, hopefully you can keep her under control. And Sorrowpaw can mentor one of the others. But you still have a long way to go."

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=56653&page=54#537 Author: Shayni Time Posted: 1/28/2018 at 3:51 PM "Getting advice from an apprentice." Ravenstar smiled. "Someday, I'd like you to mentor one of my kits. Dreamit's personality would match yours, hopefully you can keep her under control. And Sorrowpaw can mentor one of the others. But you still have a long way to go."

"It would be an honor to mentor one of your kits." Jaypaw said, dipping his head politely.

"I will make you warrior after the deputy is chosen. I must go now, to think."

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=56653&page=54#539 Author: Shayni Time Posted: 1/28/2018 at 3:58 PM "I will make you warrior after the deputy is chosen. I must go now, to think."

"Okay." Jaypaw dipped his head, and turned to go meet up with Sorrowpaw.