(Cynthia 2,autumn 2.Oh and ember is going to have a pup soon.Just look at cherry on my form.Cinder and wind on my form are the pups)
Ember
"I.." Ember didn't know what to say.She nodded and padded to her den.Hurt.That was how she felt.To know she was just a replacement for her sister.
(Wait, is leaf taking the pups?)
Bianca
"Aru,Lily is sick!We need to help her"she ran into the den,Aru was nowhere to be seen!She would have to do it on her own.She gathered the needed herbs and ran into the alpha den."Breathe,"she said to herself but lily was now vomiting.Bianca gave her the needed herbs and spoke reassuringly to her.

Look up.I hope it's ok that you are ill,I just thought there wasn't much action going on in Shining Glory.Or she could be giving birth.

Leaf
"Wait!" Leaf breathed, touching his mate's shoulder with his tail in an attempt to stop her." I know what you are thinking." He said to her," But you are wrong. I care about you and our pup and... and the pups that we can raise. I want the pups, and I want you. I don't want Cynthia. Not now, not ever. Please... please understand Ember." The look on his face was desperate, she could sense his pain. He wanted the pups, but he wants her more. He waited, barely breathing, for an answer. ( and Leaf is trying to take the pups)

Ember
"We can raise our pups together,I forgive you.But if for one minute you think I will let you take my sister's pups and crush her heart,you are wrong.Because even if she has done wrong,she does not deserve to have her pups stolen from her."She argued.Just then she felt a sharp kick in her stomach and she collapsed to the floor in agony."The pups!" she screamed
(Do we ever have,like,meetings between the two packs?Sorry for all these questions)
And if you're alright with ideas,here's an idea on the camp layout.

The deputy would be underneath the leader and instead of elders den it would be the guards and hunters.The juveniles would have another den like the medicine one