"You can call me Knuckles. And before you ask, no; It isn't because of my spurs, It's the name of the clan I descended from. And I don't care how many cronies I'm up against. I can kick most of their butts, anyway," He held up the Chaos Emerald. "Labyrinth zone, right? CHAOS CONTROL!!"

Light enveloped them...

When it cleared, the were at the entrance of the ruin.

"This way and hurry." Ajal took off at a full run stopping briefly at the cells and then heading down to sector six. "Get ready to jump. Oh no they have company."

(Stop with the awkward transitions, please.)

"Jump where?" Knuckles asked. "And they who?"

(sorry just tell me how to stop them)
"There is a casim about a hundred yards from here. The who is Luna and Ganz they're being chased by the leader of the assains' guild which I call fighting you can handle whatever else they are dealing with." Ajal replied.

"Ganz? You mean that telekinetic?" Knuckles shook his head. "Nevermind. Are they coming this way? I could fend them off,"

(You skipped straight from the entrance of the ruin to 'now we're being chased'. Did they trigger security? How did Ajal know the other two escaped and are being chased? Elaboration is pretty important, and to avoid confusion, you probably just shouldn't skip events without noting a time change. I'm not saying you did anything wrong, just a bit confusing to read.)

(Oops sorry Ganz picked the lock after Luna got put in the tank. Luna and Ganz are being chased not Ajal and Knuckels sorry. The cages that Ajal saw them locked in are empty so logic plus sense of smell.) (That explain a little bit?)

"How did you know. And no they're after Luna and Ganz they're accross the casim." Ajal ran faster and starting thinking about what could have happen to his friends.

(Much better! Just try to put that sort of info into the post next time.)

"I met him once, a long time ago." Knuckles shrugged, eyeing the abyss. "...I could cut across the chasm and get the jump on them. I'll met you there," He suggested, getting ready to glide across. "Sound good?"

(gtg)
Ajal nodded. "Good luck I have a bad feeling about what we're up against."

Knuckles shrugged. "Well, man up, okay? I'm not doing this for you," he told Ajal before gliding across the chasm. "Let's hope you're not bluffing about Ganz and who-ever-else-you-mentioned..." He muttered to himself.

Kit nodded and was tempted to touch the Emerald but favored living rather than dying.

Malory immediately flew up to the window and shouted, "TIK!"