I have a few problems with this.
Though I am okay with younger ages, I prefer a back story for the character. If you have noticed most ages are around the 20-30 range with younger characters having an older character usually played by the same person mentoring them.
Both the personality and appearence's writing is much too short. It gives barely any detail to give to the imagination.
Rp examples are show on all of the rp character forms for everyone else. It is to show you are capable to not only write to the extent needed to be acceptable but that you can write correctly.
As to mimcking voices, I believe that to be a EXTREMELY hard skill to acchive without years of training for voice control.
I do not mean to seem rude, but replied to this instead of ignoring as I want no one to feel ignored. I simply do not like how the character sheet was done
Also for the time I set the rp in most females would be wearing a dress, or at the least a blouse/more feminine look to almost all clothing. While this can be said different as 1. They are the mob and 2. no one messes with the mob, hoodies seem a bit unrealistic for a female to be wearing is all ^.^
( Small note- in the description for this rp I also stated 3 characters per person required as to keep interactions flowing )
ok ill change it a bit and put the last two in thank you for the feed back
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