Velcome to ze game! Yes, your character may have 4 in excellent and 6 in normal.

You blink into bright sunshine, standing on a beach with the water stretching out before you. Ocean, sea, or lake? You couldn't see the far side if there was one. To your left, across some huge expanse of grassland, you could make out something deep reddish orange rising above the horizon, and further beyond that, something smaller and fainter, but also reddish orange like the first one, also rising above the horizon. To your right is a vast prairie as far as your eye can see. Behind you, in the distance, you could see trees, the beginning of a forest. On the beach you were on, there's a patch of four palm trees about twenty paces away from you towards your left, coconuts hanging off the branches. The beach is made of silky sand and shells, small shiny rocks here and there.

Velcome to ze game!

You shake your head to clear the pounding inside it and discover you are somewhere you should not be. You seem to be on the tip of some curving coastline, the soft sand slowly trickling into your shoes. Before you, to your left, and to your right, a huge expanse of deep blue water stretches out. Whether it was a sea, ocean, or lake, you did not know. Behind you is a large prairie with rolling hills, the long grass waving gently in the breeze. There are bushes here and there among the hills, and a lone weirdly shaped tree here and there. Along the beach you can see a few palm trees, each of them with coconuts hanging from their limbs.

Velcome to ze game~!

You were not where you were supposed to be, you notice, as you open your eyes to bright sunshine. You seem to be on a strip of land between a oblong lake and a longer strip of water going in the other direction, to where, you did not know. To your left and right is lush green forest, and where you are now seems like the only place without trees, although it is only a small strip of land. The long grass tickles your ankles and bright red flowers dot the area.

I know your form is still a WIP, but I have something to say about your personal item:
a) You are bringing more than one item (Bow + 24 Arrows are definitely not one thing)
b) It will give you an unfair advantage over the other players
c) There is no such thing as 'purest' yew wood and 'perfect' string

Another thing, could you please make your fear a bit more... specific/plausible? Right now it says she's afraid of 'falling' which means she is terrified literally all of the time because even if you're walking, you could fall. If you're sitting, you could fall over. When I say 'Fear' I meant something almost like 'phobia'. Check out the other players' fears for ideas.

I hope you're not offended by my comments; I'm just a nitpicky narrator.

Your spot has been reserved~

The sand is warm under your feet, but the air around you didn't seem too hot. There was a cool breeze blowing in from the waters and the waves sloshed forwards towards you as if reaching for you, and finally receded back into the main body of water. You collected quite a number of shells, and also you got some shiny rocks.

Obtained:
Large shell x2
Medium shell x5
Small shell x1
Flint x2
Unpolished Rose Quartz x1

It felt a bit weird to carry around so many things at once, perhaps you could craft something to carry them. Maybe the long, sturdy grasses in the fields next to you could help...

(I'll ask you if you want to craft anything when you get materials. You have to discover crafting recipes, but you can ask me 'I want to craft...' and I'll tell you if you have enough materials to craft that thing. Be creative, sometimes you can create crafting recipes~)

The sand is warm under your feet, but the air around you didn't seem too hot. There was a cool breeze blowing in from the waters and the waves sloshed forwards towards you as if reaching for you, and finally receded back into the main body of water. You collected quite a number of shells, and also you got some shiny rocks.

Obtained:
Large shell x2
Medium shell x5
Small shell x1
Flint x2
Unpolished Rose Quartz x1

It felt a bit weird to carry around so many things at once, perhaps you could craft something to carry them. Maybe the long, sturdy grasses in the fields next to you could help...

Leto smiled warmly and looked away from the rising objects and kicked the sand, trailing her feet and quietly humming a tune to herself absentmindedly. She held the shells and stones in her arms, heading towards the grass and letting her hair hung down. She crouched down and fiddled with the grass, looking for longer and sturdier parts she could pick. She also looked around for a sharp rock.

The sun was high in the sky, almost at its zenith, as you gathered clump by clump of long grasses; they seemed sturdy enough. Your shadow falls over the grass as you gather a bunch, and when you move, something flashes from the sunlight that just fell on it. The shells you'd collected some time ago have sharp edges, but you very well could find a sharp rock on the beach. You gather some sharp rocks, but they're all quite small, the sizes ranging from half of your thumbnail to the entire nail.

Obtained:
Bundle of long grass x3
Tiny rock x5

Would you like to craft something?