-Ceres then comes out meeting the others on the road, sniffing the ground, clearly looking for something, when she notices the other-
Ceres: Where's a large group like you heading?

Kinuna could you please type it the way we do ? I mean like this:

Ceres then comes out meeting the others on the road, sniffing the ground, clearly looking for something, when she notices the other. (No need to put - behind or after)

'' Where's a large group like you heading?'' (put '' marks before and after what your sylestie or character says)

(That way it is more comfy for people to read.)

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Pine looked at the new zolnixi. His conversation with agana was interrupted. He would make sure to ask Agana about that women later again. He looked at Glitch, Agana, Ice and Val. He noticed Agana didn't look very happy.
Not wanting to start a fight so soon on the journey he answerd her before anybody else could.

'We are looking for people in black, they took something of mine. You did not happen to see them pass by did you?'

(Using my knowledge that Agana doesn't like girls and the meeting you (agana and ceres) typed earlyer that we did not include was also not very friendly If you (starfall) however feel that Agana should not not look happy just tell me and I will change it.)

(Don't worry Sena, I did not forget your cute little zolnixi. She will be found soon when Pine and co shared a few words with Ceres)

(Ok!~ I'll wait!~)

(( LOL, it's alright Amber owo~))
"Thank god we didn't need to talk about HER..." Agana thought in his head, pacing around the entrance.

Ceres: " Oh I'm looking for them too. Let's just say they took something of high value from me. I did receive some leads on them though... If you help me I will tell you my hints. I don't wish to stay with your group long anyways, I just want what's mine and then gone."
She said this in an almost high and mighty way, probably to make the others feel her importance. She is clearly not lying, but she definitely seems like she might be a bit of trouble.
(Is this better?)

Glitch whispered to the others. "If she knows something about the people in black then maybe we should let her come with us. It can't hurt, can it?"

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(Yes that's a bit better but you don't need the "Ceres:" bit. That's more the style of a script than a story. Other than that you did good.)

Pine looked the new girl in her eyes. He agreed with Glitch.

'If you can help us, you can come with us. The more help we get the better. If we have a commen goal it might be in our best interest to work together.'

Pine said though a par of him was a bit botherd by this new girl. Still his family was to importand to decline help when offerd, even from those he didn't feel comfy with. Besides he kinda knew that look in her eyes. It felt similar to his own.

"You sure sound high and mighty, little girl." He said, annoyed, staring at Ceres half heartedly* while his other focus was at the entrance. ( No idea if I spelled it right OuO" )

"Is she trying to pin point the importance of her presence?" Agana wanted say aloud, but held back because he knew that it would only get in the way of Pine's mission; saving his family.

"Anyway, i hope we get along..." He muttered unhappily, his hatred of girls speeding up in his mind.

Ceres eyeing Agana a little suspiciously, obviously can feel that he didn't feel her presence welcoming. "I over heard that a group of black robed men were staying I a nearby cave. I also heard that they go into a building in town a lot during the day then sneak off at night, probably to their cave. I am unsure if it's their main hide out, or just another small one. I do know once they're done with what they need they either: leave the town alone, or mark their existence their by doing something like burning it down. I was also told the building was an abandon flower shop, painted pink. Guess they figured that know one would bother with people hiding in a flower shop. They go in with normal like cloaks, or robes, then come out at midnight in their black robes from what I hear. If we follow we may find their nearby hideout."

'Well, I guess that is the only real clue we got. So let's check it out.'

'Everyone ok with this?'

While Pine asked he could see something move in the distance. It was small and white.